you see Kodi last night?”

In return, I told him: I did see him last night with your wife…..that is all I saw. But, I don’t know what they are talking about…….”

*Speaking and chatting*

Between the speaking and answering question, Miss Jenna disturbs our conversation…slightly. She then asked softly: What are you doing here so early Micro – Ice?” In just a short notice, she saw something on her husband’s neck!

****Jenna looks carefully at Balto’s neck****

With a shocking reaction on her face; “Are you adopted???” Cried Jenna in relief, and tears on her sapphire eyes!

Balto then replied: “Yes Jen….”

“SSShhhhhh…..” told Jenna in a happy voice. She then hugged him gently and kisses him romantically.

* I have to look away and wait for them to finish their love – privacy. * (Micro – Ice)

Chapter 3: The passed war…

During the day, we went to town. Accept for Miss. Jenna; she’s staying behind with the pups, just in - case if they wake up.
As we arrived outside the house, our owner came out with fresh – food; “Here is your food Micro and Balto. Just eat – up and stay happy!”

Without hesitation, we ate our food like a bear. However, I’ve heard something from my owner….he was speaking to his 9 year – old daughter about having a family of puppies.
But, they had some problem, trying to find a mate for me. Nevertheless, I wasn’t expecting this soon…I’m still a puppy!

When the conversation continues, Mr. Balto snap – in and talks to me about this issue; “What I think….why don’t they adopt my daughter: Aleu?” 

With a sudden gasp from my mouth, as I tried to swallow my last munch, I ask him nicely; “Who is she? What is her coat colour and looks??”
For no reason, a sly pinkish – cheek caught his attention. He then told me about his daughter; “well…how can I simplified this?”
With curly lip – touching the cold air, he utters his answer: “She’s 2 ½ years old, strong, very beautiful and attractive. But, she loves to howl!!”
He then add this statement; “The rest of my daughter’s personality is yours to find out…does this explain your answer???”

As I nod my head, I told him; “I hope that the owner agrees about this, if we brought Aleu for him to see.”

Hours passed, our dishes are emptied with crumbs and left over. When the owner’s daughter; Kate came to us for the empty dishes.
She then added; “I hope that we can have a nice family together Micro – Ice. Infact, we couldn’t find a mate for you…just enjoy yourself with Balto.”
When I drag my ears backwards in a confuse position, she pat my head and told me: “You will understand when you have a girlfriend.”

3 Hrs passed; we left the house and travel through the forest. We sprint slowly for fun, and to warm our bodies against the chilling – cold.
Along the way, I had a question; “exactly, how many time did you run during the morning Mr. Balto? I would like to know.”
He then turned around to look at me in a surprise emotion, wondering what to say. He then said: “I usually sprint to town and back to my home. But, I sometime travel through the forest just for fun.”

When the surrounding turned golden – yellow like paradise, I looked up at him sadly and said; “I missed my father and mother, they’re from Russia. But, I need parents to keep me company!!”
With a sudden sound from the gentle wind, Mr. Balto walked to me and sat beside me with sympathy and sadness. In return, he told me his legendary story, and how he had won Jenna’s heart.

As I cried on Mr. Balto’s cozy – fur, he comforts me with his gentle voice; “No matter what, Jenna and I will always be in your heart and soul. From now on, will you be my son – in - law?”
When I heard that sentence, I stop crying and talk quietly to him; “Thank you Mr. Balto, I don’t know what to say. But, I really do miss my parents!” I then left his soaked fur trying to be happy and cheerful.

After the conversation, he said brightly with happiness; “It’s alright Micro – Ice! I’ll discuss this issue with my wife; Jenna.”




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August 25, 2007
Norway Male
That's not a problem. I don't rate the fanfics I read for
solely their punctuation and grammar/spelling.
Anyway, it's very well written, considering your 1st
language is not english (mine's obviously not, either), and
improving takes time. My advice to you is; Keep writing.
Even though it's bad, keep writing. You'll get better and
better for each fanfic you write (by the way; faved)

August 25, 2007
Vietnam
Thanks for the comment Wolflux. Although, I'm very sorry for
the grammar and punctuation!

I'm from
Vietnam, that is why I have this problem. English is
actually not my 1st language.
I'm very sorry....

I've tried to fix the empty space. But, I
can't!!
I wrote my story from microsoft word.

again....sorry for this issue.

August 25, 2007
Norway Male
Hmm, I don't quite know what to say, but what you've done so
far is good. However, you have a very annoying setup on your
fanfic, and too much empty space. There are not many
descriptions, but fact-wise, it's very good.
You could
work on your grammar a bit, and you have certain points in
punctuation, and spelling, which you need to improve a bit.
Overall a good story, with some minor flaws, and a good
storyline.
I'll give it a 6/10 rating.




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