Angel --> I promise I'll never put you through it.

*hugs* love the story ashke

Just --> Well, he did have it coming. What you sow, you shall reap.

I don't think anyone expected that!
I almost feel sorry for Pete, almost...

No

Truthstater --> I'm afraid I'm confused.

baltorocks --> Thanks! Don't worry, I'll be writing more. But... well,
don't expect the vet to be wrong on this one.
BTW, feel free to talk to my characters here if you want. http://baltosource.timduru.org/board/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=15835

Balto --> What did you like best about it?

This was my fave Toby

Well it really made me feel that Toby was doing that to Luna and i
thought his sister he was doing it on and the other girl was his
sister and it realy got me exited. I told my bro to go away evan hen i
promissed that i would help him, thats how much i liked it.

AWWWW! That was so nice! But I feel bad for Luna

make that one again I finished it! man these are so good please
just keep making them I love them so much but i would love to see some
new books

page 5 and it's got me thinking...


why the hell am I reading this?

Truth --> Did pages 6-10 answer your question?

(In a Japanese accent) Misunderstanding is powerful weapon. It attack
not only the body, but the mind. (returns to normal voice) Though
really, everyone has a misunderstanding with someone else sometime in
their life, so I wasn't really shocked that it happened to Toby. No,
what DID shock me was the news about Luna at the end.
It was completely unexpected and saddening, but still a very
good story.

wolfcall --> Well, they still have each other, anyway.

I LOVED IT!!!!! Poor Luna, poor Toby... PLEASE write the
next one soon!!!

It was worth the wait in short. I loved how you had
everything so blown out of proportion! It just goes to show
that rumors hurt everyone. Excellent work!

Thanks!

BTW, cool story you have here. I was
wondering when you were going to post it.

I like it. Poor Luna...

HAHA! That was the coolest story ever! I was kind of
getting mad about Toby though, luckily I found out that he
wasn't doing it before I lost my temper XD

Great story!! Now I can't wait for next story

Thanks everyone! Kelev --> I tried, but things kept bugging
up. Well, I'm glad it was worth the wait. emily --> I know,
isn't it great? Fernmask --> That was the whole idea.
break --> Don't worry, I aim to have it out before
Christmas. Rex --> Yeah, it was kinda hard for me to do that
to her. But I figured there are thousands of women in the
real world with the same problem, and I thought they
deserved recognition.

I loved it, I found this part rather funny!

Toby grinned. “Luna’s not that type. She likes to do
her killing slower. Usually she breaks the front legs
first, then the back ones. Not a quick snap either, she
just pins the dog down and puts more and more pressure on
each leg until it gives. Then she tramples the spine a
little…”

! Great fanfic DT!*FAVS*

Fang --> Thanks.

Sweet! I really liked this one!

Battle --> You think that was good, just wait for the
Christmas special!

I loved it! the ending was REALLY funny. GREAT story!

anileu --> Yeah, although I feel kinda bad about doing what
I did to Luna.

Walto --> Thank you!