Toby Part Ten: Suspicous Minds

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : December 09, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Toby and Luna only tied the knot a short time ago, and already trouble is brewing. Rumors are springing up that Toby is being unfaithful and all the evidence is stacked against him. Is it really true? Will Toby and Luna ride out the storm, or will they go down in flames?

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Toby Part Ten: Suspicous Minds
By Jake Razor

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February 10, 2012
Usa Male
It's a pleasure to hear you say so. But did you really deduce all that from the mere presence of grain?

December 13, 2011
Usa Female
Great story! I kind of suspected what was going on from the beginning, since you mentioned the granary, but it's always a treat to read about Toby and Luna. They are a lovely couple. :)

October 19, 2010
Usa Male
Taco --> Thanks. I hope the rest are as good, or better.

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October 19, 2010
Still an awesome fanfic the second time I read it ;)

September 06, 2009
Usa Male
Just ->Thank you.

September 05, 2009
Usa Male
you have a very good point.

September 05, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Yeah, aside from the detail of why they are like that. Neither of them has the integrity or character for a real relationship. Violet, for example, thought absolutely nothing of enticing Toby to chase after her when he stated he was already taken. If that's not a lack of integrity, I don't know what is.

September 05, 2009
Usa Male
you know, now that I think about it, Pete and Violet might actually work out. look at them, she's been with almost every boy in town looking for a boyfriend, and he's been with almost every girl in town looking for a girlfriend, they're almost meant for eachother.

September 01, 2009
Usa Male
St4rr --> Glad you liked it. And yeah, I designed the twists to be misleading. I wanted readers to feel the way Luna did.

August 30, 2009
Usa
Great job with the fanfic and great plot twists. When violet kissed toby I thought this fanfic was going 2 turn out like the movie Obsessed


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