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| May 28, 2009 | ||
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thanks guys i will write more of the story as i go along no wai is
this over with ha ha ha ![]() |
| May 26, 2009 | ||
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That was pretty intense. I don't know as I'm a fan of the spiritual
aspect of it. But that aside, you could stand to improve the
punctuation a bit. The ending was a good hanging point, though. |