Balto paced along nomes streets seeing dogs chatting to one anoghter and giving Balto dirty looks then snigering away.

"Erm i don't beleive Balto saved nome, I think it was my dad!!Steele!"The dog laughed.Then turned to him and scowled, fanilly seeing her friends in her eyes again. Balto's eyes widened then norrowed with hate.

"Hey!! Thats not true!!"He growled. "if it wasn't for me Children wouldn't be giving you hugs and smiles the town will be quite and lonely!!"

"Your just jealous!!"The white puffy dog called StarShoot smirked as Steele came up behind Balto and pushed him into yellow snow!

"EWWWW!!!!Didn't your mother ever tell you never eat yellow snow?!?!?!?!" She laughed with his friends.

"ENOUGH!!!"Jenna barked, running up to Balto and helping him up whilst Rosy, her dad and mum talked to a shopkeeper.

"This is no way to be bringing up your daughter Steele!!!"Jenna snapped."She needs a better  farther or lessons!!!Bring her round to mine tmorrow at 1 'o' clock...SHARP!!!So I can change her from Ladette To Lady...GOT IT???!!!"

"Got it..."Steele growled as he crecked his shoulders, StarShoots jaw dropped and Jenna used her paw to close it. Balto and Jenna walked back to there owners after that argument....! Balto and Jenna looked at each other and heard the humans talking to each other and it was.

"Some people have saw 4 lone wolves huddles together...we don't know where they came from....when people go up to them they run into the shadows and hide there"The shopkeeper told them.

 

                        END OF PART 1



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April 20, 2011
Usa
when will part 2 be really

April 25, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
brilliant story

September 12, 2007
Usa Male
Well, it was a litle confusing- make that a lot confusing-
but it looks like it has potential. Was that part about
yellow snow really neccessary, though? Oh, BTW, you misspelled "Beginning.":red:




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