Toby Part Eleven: The Lost Shall Be Found

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : March 18, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Toby and Luna are still devastated by the revalation about Luna's condition. But in the midst of tragedy, a new hope raises its head. But will this be a chance to recover a lost wish, or simply an empty lamp?

Length : Long -

Characters : 3844 visits



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Toby Part Eleven: The Lost Shall Be Found
By Jake Razor

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January 24, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
It was...... :howl: AMAAAAAAAAAAAZING!!!!!!!

March 19, 2008
Ooh, your best yet! I love everything about this story, from Chase's
appearence to your new characters. (I would go on about it, but I
don't want to post spoilers!) Anyway, keep it up!

March 19, 2008
Usa
Arrow sounds like a really cute character, and honestly I loved your
ending. She sounds so innocent yet aware of things, like a real pup
should be. :3

March 19, 2008
Female
...Whoa... That was so cool!!! I loved it! I must say this is my
second favorite story on the site!

March 20, 2008
Usa Male
redwolf --> Oops. I'll have to fix that.
Everyone -->
Thank you!

March 22, 2008
Usa Male
Muzzle --> Thanks!

Guest
Guest
March 21, 2008
it was awesome! ^^

Guest
Guest
March 22, 2008
Ovarall, this may be my second favorite to part Ten only. I found it
to be quite interesting and I loved Arrow in this one! (I would say
why but, can't give spoilers! XD) Again, great job!

March 25, 2008
Usa Male
OK, G'Reth.

March 25, 2008
Female
I LOVED THIS ONE! IT HINK THAT IT'S MY OVERALL FAVORITE!! I LOVE
ARROW! I'm headed to ask her a question now!

March 28, 2008
Usa Male
Jahara --> Thanks, but don't come down on yourself. Look for ways to
improve!

March 28, 2008
Usa Female
What a wonderful story! Honestly, know my Pirate series seems
foolish

March 27, 2008
Usa Male
Break --> Thanks. I hope I won't have to keep you waiting too long.
And no problem on the wording.

March 28, 2008
Congrats on getting to number one most popular fanfic this week!

March 27, 2008
Sweden Male
Great story can't wait for next one
(sorry for I'm useing so few word all
the time )

March 21, 2008
Usa Male
baltorocks --> Well, it is a little whacked-out (I didn't intend
nearly that many "enters"), but hopefully it still flows well. And
thanks!
Sandstorm --> Thanks! Hopefully it won't be too long,
but it will be several weeks at the very least. Probably a couple of
months before I'm actually able to put it up (it's complicated. I can
explain if you really want to know).

March 21, 2008
Usa Female
none
I loved it! Arrow is sooo cute!!! I love her sassy attitude! I
can't wait to read the next part in the series!

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