White Legend

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : December 11, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : The original story of Aniu. A misunderstood love. A bitter betrayal. A story of life. This is the tale of the White Wolf, and how a hero came to be.

Length : Long -

Characters :
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White Legend
By Jake Razor

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September 06, 2009
Usa Male
Angel --> It was a doomed romance. Of course it was sad. But thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

September 01, 2009
Usa
This story is sad but the writing is wonderful. Once again showing your marvelous talent ashke.

August 09, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Thank you. I aim to please.

December 22, 2008
Usa Male
Rocks --> Well, it's possible that I may write a sequal someday, but
since I don't want to get anyne's hopes up, I'm going to say probably
not. Glad you liked it, though.

May 05, 2009
Usa Male
Juuchan --> Thank you! I'm glad you found my work unique, and it's good to know the touch of having Aniu come out of nowhere was appreciated.
I'm glad you liked Kodan's character, especially since I usually try to make the good guy someone you want to root for. It's good to know the classic hero archetype hasn't lost support.
I plead guilty to stealing the multiple perspective technique from K.A. Applegate's "Animorphs Megamorphs" side-series. I couldn't settle on what would be the better approach, first-person or third, so I decided that method would make for a good marriage of the two (and what better thing to have in a love story?).
Thanks for faving me, and supporting my work. If you haven't read my other stories, I hope you do and find them just as pleasing as this one!

December 13, 2008
Usa Male
The ending was very sad, but I thought it was great! Another fine bit
of work Dragon.

December 14, 2008
Usa Male
Drifter --> Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, it was rather sad. Of course, a
sense of tragdy was essential to the whole tale, so that couldn't well
be helped.

December 15, 2008
Usa Male
Drifter --> No, I actually got it from the "Megamorphs" branch series
of the Animorphs books. As for Kodan, I purposely left that up in the
air to leave the door open for future possibilities. This story was
basically designe so that it could mesh with most of the ideas out
there concerning what happened to Balto's parents.

December 21, 2008
Uk Male
BRILLIANT! One of the best fanfic's i've read (Not including Toby)...
May I ask, will the're be a part two? Or can we all probably guess who won...

BUT what happened to Kodan? Man.. So many questions!

January 27, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
You should write 1 about how Balto got too Nome! and how he forgot his parents! :howl: It will surely rock!

January 27, 2009
Usa Male
Wolfelana --> Maybe someday I will. I don't know how many ideas I could come up with that, or how original I could be with it. But I'll keep it in mind.

February 09, 2009
Usa Male
Lupa --> Thank you. I'm not sure if I'll write more, but I'm glad you anticipate it.

April 28, 2009
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
Hmm, this was quite an enjoyable read! I had read a lot of fanfiction dealing with this subject explaining the backgrounds of Aniu and Balto's husky father, but this was one of the most unique ones I'd read in a long while!

I liked how Aniu's actual past is a mystery - that just adds more personality to her character and I love it. I also like Kodan's character - he's the good guy that you want to root for and he really seems to care about his love for Aniu. I love the use of the multiple perspectives - it really worked well so that we could enter the characters' actual thoughts and inner emotions. Bravo!

Great job! *faves you* Personally, I don't think it needs a sequel or continuation. Still, it's a wonderful story that everyone should read!

- Juuchan17

February 08, 2009
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
That was sad, sweet and funny all rolled into one! My kind of story.:) I loved it though and can't wait for the next part. I also thought the quote at the end was really sweet:cool: :P

July 30, 2009
Usa Male
That was the best story of Balto's parents I've ever read.

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