Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : June 05, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : Christmas time is coming around, and who knows what miracles may happen? But as Toby and Luna's past catches up with them heading for the future, it'll take more than one miracle to get them and Arrow through. And if something isn't done, this may be Luna's last Christmas, ever. (I wanted to post this last December, but I decided the series wasn't ready). Bonus: Contains never before revealed secrets for Pete fans! (Caution: some minor blood)

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Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles
By Jake Razor

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January 27, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
And now I have finished book 12! :crazy: IT WAS AWSOME!!!

April 15, 2009
Newzealand
this is the first thing that I have read were the dog(or cat) which has a chance of dieing when the pups(or kittens) were born that actually lived.
Well,I only read 3 that had that but it's a first.

April 27, 2009
Usa Male
Truthstater --> Glad to know that I'm different.

June 14, 2008
Female
Moderator on LATTS & TLKS
I loved that twist! And I also really like this fanfic itself and the
way Pete rescued Toby! *fav* Good job DT

July 10, 2009
Usa Male
Aleu --> It is written, "Not even a sparrow falls to the ground unnoticed."

November 11, 2008
Usa Male
Cool! So you made it so that it would be alright in the end.
Another wonderful piece of work, as usual. Can't wait for the next
one.

November 11, 2008
Usa Male
Drifter --> Thanks for both comments. It's not often I get feedback like this.
Yes, making Luna that way was intentional. I was inspired by a variety of Judeo-Christian "legends" to make her that way so that she and Toby would be that much more appreciative of the blessing when it finally came.

November 09, 2008
Usa Male
balto_fan --> Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Yes, there will
be more of the Toby series, although after the next one I might put it
on hold or start working on some stories for another series in
between. Rest assured, though, there's more to come.

June 09, 2008
Uk Male
Hmmp... loved it, but it wasn't special... Like i said in the PM, the
fact that i knew the plot so i coul'd write my "Confidential" took
away the feeling that i always get with these fan fics. All in all
great fan fic.

June 07, 2008
Usa Male
Walto --> Thanks! That was exactly what I had in mind for this
fanfic.

June 14, 2008
Uk Female
wow such a swweet story,i loved it^^*faves*

Guest
Guest
June 07, 2008
Well, I would have to say that I have a new favorite. ^^ Your story
can truly bring out the good feelings of the holiday, and can leave
most of the readers with a strong sensation of happiness and joy. A
job well done!

June 07, 2008
Usa Male
wolflover --> If I could obtain the permission of Universal Studios, I
just might do that.

June 24, 2008
Usa Male
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

December 04, 2008
Usa Female
Wow! I don't celebrate Christmas (I'm Jewish!), but this was a very
touching story! Keep writing!

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