Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : June 05, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : Christmas time is coming around, and who knows what miracles may happen? But as Toby and Luna's past catches up with them heading for the future, it'll take more than one miracle to get them and Arrow through. And if something isn't done, this may be Luna's last Christmas, ever. (I wanted to post this last December, but I decided the series wasn't ready). Bonus: Contains never before revealed secrets for Pete fans! (Caution: some minor blood)

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Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles
By Jake Razor

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August 22, 2009
Usa
Wonderful Job.

August 18, 2009
Usa Male
BlackJack --> Yeah, I think out of all the Toby stories, this was the one I enjoyed writing the most. You've gotten exactly what it ws meant to convey.

August 16, 2009
Australia
This one is definately my favourite out of the Toby series. I love it because it is full of love, the joy of becoming a family, and the meaning of family. It also has it's intense and suspensful moments, and this makes it even more exciting to read. I love the themes that you include in your stories and how well you stick to the plot of the story throughout the series. Great job. :)

August 05, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Thanks. I thought it was only appropriate to include those names.

July 29, 2009
Usa Male
Amazing story, and great names for the pups.

July 08, 2009
Usa
Lone Wolf- stay away
Even dogs have guardian angels.

June 09, 2008
Usa Male
Baltorocks --> I know, I tried to make it special. But fine-tuning a
lot of things and skipping a step or two in my usual process probably
took its toll.

June 12, 2008
Usa Male
canines --> Thanks, and I certainly am.
"Cherokee Wisdom" is about a
principal known commonly as "garbage in, garbage out." To give an
example, someone who watches a lot of violent movies, reads
questionable media, and generally dwells on "base" materials is more
likely to go down the wrong path than someone who chooses to fill his
or her mind with good things instead. As one of my favorite songs put
it, "Sooner or later it's a matter of fact, What you see is how you'll
act." Which, on a side note, is why I'm so hard-line about fanfic
content, especially on kids' sites.
"How Did You Do It" is about
that and much more. Thanks for reading and commenting! *hugs*

June 05, 2008
Usa Male
Kiwi --> Thanks on Cherokee Wisdom.
Silver --> Thank you. I
aim to please. Kelev --> XD --> Oh, don't worry. There's more to
come.

June 05, 2008
You know, I'm starting to think I should just leave a prerecorded
message for each story you upload, stating "WOW, this new one is the best so far!" Really
though, this IS the best one to date. I'll leave you a more detailed
review in PM, so I don't post spoilers publicly.

Great
job as always, I hope that this isn't the end of the serise!

June 05, 2008
Usa Female
Where's da lemon?
LOVED IT!!!! Defenitly worth the wait!!!!

June 05, 2008
Usa
Just got done reading it, GREAT JOB. I can't Wait for the next ADGTH
fic.

June 06, 2008
Female
AAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! THIS WAS SPECTACULAR!!!! I AM SOOOOO GLAD YOU
WROTE IT!!!!!!! You're whole Toby series is amazing, Dragon Tamer!!
Thank you for writing them!! They are absolutly amazing, full of
surprises, and show how great family and friends are! Not to mentiont
he wonderful characters in the books! I can't imagine your series any
diffrent than it is. All of it is so wonderful, if it was any
diffrent, it wouldn't be Toby, would it? This is so amazing!!!!!

June 06, 2008
Usa Female
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Couldn't be better!

June 06, 2008
Usa Male
Thanks, Motto, G'Reth, Jahara! There's more to come, don't you worry.
Motto --> It will be delayed somewhat, but rest assured it's in
progress.

June 06, 2008
Usa Female
Woo! :D Best series I've ever read (That includes the ig ones.--Harry
Potter, A series of Unfortunate Events, The Spiderwick Chronicles,
etc.)--you should honeslty think about actually publishing this.
Honestly. :D

June 10, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
http://WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPP whhooop sorry coulnt help
it it was awesome !!! are you writing any more??It ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!

June 14, 2008
Usa Male
Sardonyx --> Thanks. Yeah, I was laughing when I wrote that part. axyl
--> Thank you.

June 14, 2008
Usa
Say wut?
Wow, that was fantastic! I can't wait for "Toby: The Beginning"

June 18, 2008
Usa Male
redwolf --> Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

June 18, 2008
Usa Female
This was awesome! I was so happy when Luna was able to have puppies!
And to have Pete rescue Toby, well, that was irony at its best. Great
job, DT!

June 18, 2008
Usa Male
baltorocks --> You did comment, but thanks again! Did you like the
twist at the end, though?

June 18, 2008
Uk Male
I can't remember if i commented on this fan fic yet. But anyway it was
great, i didn't feel how i normally feel reading the Toby series this
time (Probably because i knew exactly what would happen) though. But
all-in-al great fan fic.

June 14, 2008
Usa Male
Iditarod --> Should be soon.

July 23, 2008
Usa Female
Rock of Ages
I loved it! I actually thought Luna was going to die...! She is very
lucky. I love Toby and Luna, they're awesome chars!

Guest
Guest
July 21, 2008
I loved that one! :D

June 19, 2008
Usa Female
Small but Determined
Oh.. my.. gosh.. I'm currently reading this and it's soooooo good! I
think I'm going to explode over happiness.

December 04, 2008
Usa Male
wolf girl --> And it only touches the surface. If you'd like to know
about the real depth of Christmas (it's more pertinenet to you than
you might think), PM me by all means. In any case, I am pleased you
enjoyed the sory.

January 27, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
COOL story so far! I'm only on pg. 8! It's so awsome!!! :howl:

January 27, 2009
Usa Male
Wolfelana --> Hope the remaining pages are as good as the first ones. :)

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