Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles

Author : Jake Razor

Date sent : June 05, 2008

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : Christmas time is coming around, and who knows what miracles may happen? But as Toby and Luna's past catches up with them heading for the future, it'll take more than one miracle to get them and Arrow through. And if something isn't done, this may be Luna's last Christmas, ever. (I wanted to post this last December, but I decided the series wasn't ready). Bonus: Contains never before revealed secrets for Pete fans! (Caution: some minor blood)

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Toby Part Twelve: A Time for Miracles
By Jake Razor

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June 30, 2010
Usa Male
Silwer --> Wow. Fourth time? In JUNE, no less? That's great! So what did you like most about it?

Beachpup --> Thanks. There have been accounts of angels taking on animal forms, so I figured why not?

June 29, 2010
Usa
angel wolf ..... arrow thinking of the name angel .. the human thinking of Angel as a name right after arrow said it.. I like how you put all of that together!!

June 25, 2010
Norway Male
My fourth time reading it, still awsome!

September 06, 2009
Usa Male
St4rr --> Well, I thought Toby's fear of Luna's question was kind of funny. The Toby series does have humor, but of a different sort. The skit's brand worked very nicely for Charlie and Sasha, but I really wanted to let Toby and Luna do it their own way.
iluvsjoe --> Thank you.

September 05, 2009
Canada Female
Mercury Phoenix Trust
awesome.

September 05, 2009
Usa
yea I saw the skit and I still think it would have worked nicely here too scince your fanfics don't have any really funny moments

September 05, 2009
Usa Male
St4rr --> Nice idea, but "What Are You Talking About?" was actually a re-interpretation of a skit on YouTube (see the link at the end), and was pretty much there to be funny. The scene in this story, while also intended to be funny, had to be true to the characters, and it needed to have a more personal, emotional aspect. So doing the same thing with them really wouldn't have worked.
Just --> You got it.

September 03, 2009
Usa Male
I just figured out what you meant about the names, you named them after the three wise men.

September 03, 2009
Usa
Great job with the fanfic. You should have made the part where Luna tells toby that she's pregnant more like your all dogs go 2 heaven fan fics

August 23, 2009
Usa Male
Angel --> Thank you.

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