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him. Then, the dog team felt the rumbling of the ground. The ground cracked under the dog team, and the ground opened up beneath them. They began to fall into the dark abyss. Balto ran toward them, knowing he would be too late. He approached the opening in the earth, afraid of what he would see. But when he looked over the edge, he saw Kodi holding onto a branch in the dirt. He was bewildered that the branch was holding all of the dogs, the sled, and the musher at the bottom. Especially that Kodi could hold that much weight. Kodi was biting into the branch as hard as he could to keep from falling into the dark abyss below. He looked up at his father with a thought of never seeing him, or his mother again.
Balto : Hang on Kodi!!!
Balto quickly looked around for something to pull him out with. He found a long, and thick tree branch that would hopefully be strong enough to hold up the dog team.
Balto grabed the branch, and ran to the opening in the earth. Balto lowered the branch to Kodi. When Kodi let go of the branch he was holding onto so he could get the one lowered to him, he was pulled down before he could grab it.
Balto : Kodi ! No !
Kodi : Dad!!!.......
Balto watched them fall until he could not see them anymore. He laid down, and cryed.
Balto : Someone please help.......
Balto heard someone behind him. He quickly stood up, and turned. The dog he saw standing before him was the one he saw in the alley, Arconala.
Arconala : Why are you in sorrow?
Balto : My son........
Arconala walked passed Balto, and looked down into the abyss. His eyes began to glow yellow. Balto steped back. A whirlwind of light surrounded Arconala. The sun was closed off by storm clouds. Balto backed up even more. Arconala began to speak.
Arconala : With life, at a common pace, return what has been moved from time and space.
The abyss began to puff out white smoke. Seven lightning strikes came from the clouds, and into the opening in the earth. Balto watched with amazement. He soon saw Kodi come out of the opening, then Kirby, Dusty, and all of the other dogs along with their musher. They floated in the air, and landed softly infront of Balto. Balto nudged Kodi, and he slowly opened his eyes, and looked up at his father.
Kodi : .....Dad?...
Balto : Kodi ! Your okay!
Kodi : Yea...I huess i am
Arconala's whirlwind of light stoped, and his eyes turned normal. He walked over to Balto and the dog team.
Balto : Thank you so much Arconala. This was a miracle today.
Arconala : Dont thank me, thank your creator, the great God Almighty.
Arconala turned, and closed his eyes. He turned to mist, and blew away.
Kodi : What kind of dog is Arconala?
Balto : I dont think he is a dog son, but an angel dog.
Balto went with the dog team back to Nome.
That night, Balto sat on the beach, his mind pondering on what had happened that day. He looked out into the open sea, wondering about who Arconala had told him to thank for Kodi's rescue.
Balto : Who is God Almighty?
Arconala : Im shocked that you dont know.
Balto was starteled by the voice of Arconala.
Balto : Were are you?
The water near the shore began to glow a light blue, and Arconala walked out of the water, and onto shore, standing before Balto.
Arconala : Right here. Now, how could you not know of God?
Balto : Well, for the fact i have never heard that name before.
Arconala : Since you dont know, i guess i will explain. As you should alwready know, at the begining of time, God created Heaven and Earth. God walked upon the waters of the formless earth. He spoke "Let There Be Light", and the sun was made, which gave light to earth. Next, he created the land, then plants, and we animals, such as yourself. He created Humans next.
Balto : All of this is very confusing to me.
Arconala laughed a bit
Arconala : I would figure. Well, then years later, he sent his son Jesus to die for our sins, so we could be forgiven of all our sins, and we could get to Heaven. Humans have a chance to get to Heaven, and so do you Balto.
Balto : Me?
Arconala : Yes, you. I will tell you how you can be saved.
Balto : Please do.
Arconala tought Balto about salvation, Satin, God, Jesus, Angels, and all of the other stuff. After this, Balto was ready to be saved.
Arconala : Close your eyes, and bow you head, then repeat what i say.
Balto did as told. He prayed for the first time, and was saved.
Arconala : Now, go share this with the ones you know, and others.
Balto ran off toward Jenna's, and told her everything, and that night she was saved to. Balto told all of the dogs, and they were all saved.
Balto was felling something he had never felt before in his heart. He could tell Jesus was with him.
Balto wanted to do something that related to sharing Jesus with the animals, so he put together a club to be just about praising God.
That night, all of the dogs, including Aleu, and her pack came to the meeting. Balto couldnt wait to do what he planed.
All of the dogs surrounded the beach, and waited for Balto to preform. Balto stood before all of the dogs, and began to sing.
(place the music player here)
Balto :
(get the lyrics for "Liffting up the name of Jesus")
Later that night, Arconala appeared before Balto.
Arconala : You've done well. You have pleased him.
Balto : Anything for my savior
Arconala : The end is near though. But you should not worry. Everything will turn out fine.
Balto : I do have one question to ask.
Arconala : State your question, i will be happy to answer it.
Balto : Wait here. I will be right back.
Arconala watched Balto run off. In a few miniutes, Balto came running back with the necklace he had found.
Balto droped it before Arconala.
Balto : Can you tell me what this is?
Arconala : A necklace
Balto : No, what it is for.
Arconala : Oh, well, this necklace has the ability to show events in the future. Its nothing special.
Balto : Well, you keep it.
Balto pushed the necklace over to Arconala with his paw, then steped back.
Arconala : You found it, so it is rightfully yours.
Arconala gave the necklace back to Balto, and walked back into the water.
Balto picked up the necklace, and walked up onto his boat. He put the necklace by his water bowl, and went to sleep for the night.
To Be continued.........
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necklace is a touch of paganism that would be best removed
from any story based on Christianity), and pleased that you
removed Muk and Luk's little "prank." However I must warn
you that this story does violate the rules concerning religious
content, which I'm afraid apply to Christianity as much as
any other religion. I think it would be wise to relocate
this to another website with less restrictive rules before
someone less forgiving gets at it.