Behind Your Eyes

Author : The Silver Phoenix

Date sent : June 11, 2007

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : This is the love story of Balto and Jenna, beginning just after the end of Balto I. It's actually the first fanfic I ever wrote, but it's been extensively edited from the first version I made two years ago (it was my first sojurn into romance writing, and the dialogue used to be a bit corny. If it's still cheesy, that's why). In any case, I hope you like it. Contains a love scene and suggestive dialogue.

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Behind Your Eyes
By The Silver Phoenix

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Guest
Guest
August 05, 2008
Interesting song list you have for this story. Here's a few others that might fit:

You And Me - Lifehouse
Amazed - Lonestar
This I Promise You - *NSYNC
I've Been In Love Before - Cutting Crew
I Can't Explain - Scorpions
When I See You Smile - Bad English
Can't Fight This Feeling - REO Speedwagon
It's Your Love - Tim McGraw & Faith Hill (This would be a good alternate for "There You'll Be", which sounds more like it's about remembering someone who has passed on)
My Goddess - Resurrected Phoenix (This is one of my band's original songs that we're working on for our debut album. Still need to complete the sound by finding a lead guitarist and a drummer, but the "First Look: My Goddess" demo is up on our MySpace page for listening to.)

July 30, 2008
Usa Male
midKnight--> Thanks! I think it's my favorite of the ideas I've had
for Balto stories.

July 26, 2008
Usa Female
That was a great story!!!!!!

Guest
Guest
December 30, 2007
And no, I don't think it sounds one bit cheesy. I also couldn't help but notice that you featured two Savage Garden songs ("I Knew I Loved You" and "Truly, Madly, Deeply") in this story. Are they Balto and Jenna's favorite band by any chance? This comment, by the way, was written on my birthday.

December 21, 2007
Sweden Male
This is the best!!!! It's my nr 1 favorite story I don't
know how many times I read it (but I think I done it 5
times )

Guest
Guest
December 19, 2007
I've always wondered why Balto and Jenna have never been
shown kissing before. I mean, if Lady and Tramp could do it,
and if Charlie and Sasha from AGDTH could do it, why not
Balto and Jenna. At least this story put that notion to
rest.

December 18, 2007
Canada Female
i loved this story so much. balto and jenna's love is
denfintly a great couple. balto and jenna forever!

August 03, 2007
Usa Male
B&J4ever--> Thank you for the compliments! I'm glad you
didn't think it was cheesy! I have some random stuff
written that I might collect into a sequel.

July 11, 2007
Usa Female
it was awesome you have to write a sequel or two. it wasn't
cheesy it was pasionet and gentle . i laughed i cryed i
smiled. it was awesome if you don't write a sequel my life
will be sad and pathetic forever.

June 26, 2007
Usa Male
Underworld Wolf--> I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll try
to put some more stuff out soon.

June 26, 2007
Usa Male
KellyClarksonGirl--> I appreciate the compliment! I didn't
expect such good reactions for this story!

June 26, 2007
Usa Male
Break--> I have a mini-continuance that's almost ready for
posting, but I'll want to make at least one other before I
send it. I'm not sure how long that will take, but I'll try
and generate some ideas.

Thanks for reading!

Guest
Guest
June 24, 2007
nice job, impressive, sweet,kind,gentle,e.t.c i'm impressed.
it reminds me......

June 24, 2007
Sweden Male
Hahaha I read wrong on one place in the book first time I
read it but I did read right this time so it don't confuse
me anymore Oh I love this story

June 20, 2007
Usa Female
That was so, so... sweet! I like started to cry it was so
good!

June 18, 2007
Sweden Male
Oh no wolf quest part 4 But this story... I
just...
I can't be better A story like this... It
feels like just have read chapter 1 so a chapter 2 would
just be... Can it be better!?? A 5-6 continues on this and
you have a book that you carn millions, no billions on It
was just so good please a continue

June 16, 2007
Usa Male
Dragon Tamer--> I'm glad you found it sweet. My next
project is looking to be much darker...

June 16, 2007
Usa Male
Squival--> I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope to be able to
get something else out before too long.

Guest
Guest
June 12, 2007
Oh my gosh. It's so good. So sweet and honest. I';m
impressed.

June 12, 2007
Usa Male
Very sweet. Sorry about the blank post before. I'm rather curious to know how Balto and Jenna would have felt, though, if they had known they were (figuratively speaking) on Candid Camera.

June 12, 2007
Usa Male
Dragon Tamer--> Thanks for reading! Glad you like it so
far!

June 12, 2007
Usa Male
Lone Wolf--> I wasn't sure about this one; I'm really
pleased that you liked it so much! Balto and Jenna are my
favorite couple as well. The idea to write a love story for
them came from the scene where they are under the
hospital.

June 12, 2007
Usa Male
I've only read up to page 11, and I really should be getting
to sleep now. But so far, !

June 11, 2007
Usa Male
Belle's Ice River pack
There are no words to describe how awesome this was. I've
been waiting for a love fic like this to come out. (Perhaps
I'll have to try one of my own, now. )
Out off
all the Balto characters, these two are my favorites, and my
favorite couple. Your fic, I believe, did that love justice.
Write on. -LWf

February 08, 2009
Usa
Holy Craps!!! this fanfic is the best fanfic about Balto and Jennas love and just about them in general! Wow!! I am seriously speechless, well partially or else i wouldnt be able to write this haha. I did have to take a second so i could actually write. :) I mean, my hands are still shaking. This was a masterpiece, a marvelous display of words and emotions, i really felt like i was in your story. i smiled when they would be together, i cried when they said they love each other, and ill be honest i got hot at the last part haha. "Im yours, take me!"----classic!! haha


all in all PERFECTION!!
it was not cheesy, it was the right amount of everything!!

GENIUS, PURE GENIUS

February 08, 2009
Lithuania Female
OMG...More than wonderful story!!I do not have enough words to say...:o

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