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| July 13, 2007 | ||
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From as far as I've gotten, I'm a little confused by it. Jenna and Aleu don't seem as confused or surprised by what's going on as they realistically would be, and Balto seems to "remember" stuff that neither happened nor was told to him by Steele, like when he told Jenna to "go back to Steele." Aside from the lack of clarity, though, the plot is interesting. |