parents in unison.  “What are you doing here?”

Toby shook the snow from his fur.  “Dad, it’s Pete.  He went after Trixie, and he sent me to tell you…”

“Went after Trixie?!” exclaimed Rex.  “But I told him not to…”

“Dad,” Toby blurted, cutting off his father for the first time in his life, “I told him too, but it’s urgent.  He said to get any officers you can round up and come after him.”

Rex stared at Toby in a daze and turned to Terry.  “Someday, these boys are going to be the end of me,” he muttered.  He returned his gaze to Toby.  “Alright, show me where he went.”

 

Pete raced through the winter night, heart hammering in his chest.  He had found tracks which he assumed were from a dog, most likely Trixie.  The tracks didn’t matter.  He knew deep down that she had gone this way.  He could feel it in his gut.  ‘Come on, come on,’ he mentally abused himself, willing his feet to go faster.  He was heading for a place he had been only once…

“So this is where you like to hang out, huh?” Pete asked, not terribly interested in the scenery.

“It’s great, isn’t it?” asked Trixie, staring down at the ten-foot drop, bottoming out in a foaming cauldron of frigid black water.  Only the constant movement had prevented ice from forming, leaving the churning waves to shine in the moonlight.  “So much power in such a small pool.”

“Yeah, I guess,” Pete replied.  He said so only to humor Trixie; in truth, he found the place boring.  Then an idea came to him.  “Hey, check this out.”  He spun sideways and began to canter along the very edge of the bank.

“Pete, look out, you could…!”  But before she could finish, the ground crumbled under Pete’s feet and he fell, only catching himself just in time with his front paws.  Hastily, Trixie grabbed his collar and hauled him back up.  “You are such a macho,” she told him.  “If you fell in there, you’d probably freeze to death if you didn’t drown first.”

Pete shook himself and laughed, trying to shake off the unease of his close encounter with the grim reaper.  “Yeah, yeah, whatever,” he grumbled.

“I’m serious,” she told him.  “If you fall in there, you’ll never be seen again.”

‘If she’s going there now, I’m gonna kill her,’ he thought.  ‘And if she ain’t, I’ll kill her for making me go out of my way.’

He entered a copse of pine trees and made a beeline for the place.  “Trixie!” he called.  “Trixie…!”  Throwing himself through a tangle of bushes, he stopped.  There she was, right at the edge, staring back at him.

“Leave me alone,” she groaned, her voice choked with tears.

“Listen,” he pleaded, “Just let me…”

“Go away!” she yelled.  “You just won’t change.  You or any of the other boys I’ve tried to change, and you never do.”

vTrixie…” he pleaded, “I just wanted… oh, never mind what I wanted, just don’t do it.”

She sniffled.  “Don’t do what?” she asked.

Pete stuttered.  “Uh, well, I uh… I kinda figured you came here to kill yourself.”

She snorted.  “Don’t flatter yourself,” she snapped.  “I just came here to get away from you.”

Pete groaned inwardly and took a step toward her.  “Look, I know we got off bad, but…”

“Go away!” she yelled.  “Just leave me alone!  You guys are dirt, all of you!  Now get away or I’ll…”

The rest of her sentence ended in a scream as the bank crumbled beneath her and she fell head over paws into the foaming water.

“Trixie!” screamed Pete, rushing to the water’s edge.  He didn’t even slow down, just ran out into space and hurled himself into the swirling cauldron.

The water was even colder than he had imagined, drenching his fur in an instant and wrapping his body like the very cloak of death.  Worse, it was impossible to tell or control where he was going.  A powerful downcurrent dragged him across the stone bottom, then swept upward and flung him against a small boulder.  Over and under, back and forth, like a mouse in a washer filled with rocks and lined with sandpaper.  There was no escape, no chance of grabbing hold of anything.  Pete’s mind became filled with one absolute certainty.

He was going to die.

 

Rex was panting hard as he ran behind his son.  Despite the biting cold, he felt unnaturally warm as his muscles strained to keep up.  “How you ever talked me into this, I’ll never know!” he shouted.

“That makes two of us,” Toby called back.  “But we must be closing in; the tracks are getting clearer by the minute!”

“And you’re sure Pete wasn’t up to anything untoward?”

Toby would have shaken his head, but he didn’t want to break stride.  “At this point, I’m not sure of anything,” he replied.  “I just know he seemed desperate, which to me says he was up to either something really good, or really bad.”

“Any indication which it was?”

“I’d like to say really good, but after what you told me about his dad’s grave marker, I couldn’t even guess.”

“I sincerely hope it was the first,” Rex panted.  “I’m going to have a hard time keeping Exile away from his neck after this one.”

 

Pete felt himself floating.  The water had grown quiet, but his surroundings were pitch-black.  He choked, gasped, and spat up a stomachful of water.  At least he could breathe now.  But the rocks, the beating, the near-drowning had all taken their toll.  As blood leaked through several places on his body where the skin was gashed or rubbed raw, he could feel his life ebbing away.

Suddenly he became aware of another presence in the cave.  A huddled figure lay in a corner, shaking.

“Trix…ie?” groaned Pete.

Trixie lifted her head and whimpered.  “What do you want?” she scarcely more than squeaked.

“Look…” Pete groaned, “I…”

A splashing sound came from behind them and another dog came up out of the water.  “Thought I’d find you two in here,” came a familiar baritone.

“Rex?” asked Pete.

“How did you find us?” asked Trixie.

“I have my ways,” he replied, shaking the water from his fur.  “Is anyone hurt?”

“I’m… very cold,” Trixie couldn’t help whining.  “And I can’t move my paw.  Every time I try it hurts really bad.”

‘Thanks to me,’ Pete thought, wracked with guilt.

“What about you, Pete?” asked Rex.  Pete was surprised to hear that the older dog sounded genuinely concerned.

“Ah, just a few scratches,” Pete boasted, trying to rise to his feet before collapsing from sheer exhaustion.

“Sit tight,” Rex ordered.  “Miss Trixie, can you walk?”

Trixie reluctantly rose to her feet, her right paw held aloft.  “Not too bad,” she replied through her teeth.“Alright.  Pete, do you think you can swim?”

Pete shook his head.  “I don’t think so.”

“Alright,” Rex said.  “You’re in worse condition, so I’ll get you out of here and then come back for you, Miss.”

“But what about the rapids?” protested the girl.  “You’ll never get out alive.”

Rex shook a few more stubborn drops from his fur.  “As I said, I have my ways.  Now, come on, Pete.”

Surprised that he had the strength to do it, Pete staggered to his feet.  “You think I can make it?” he groaned.

Rex moved to his side and steadied him, unintentionally pressing against one of the raw spots.  “All things considered, I don’t see how you have a choice.  Just hang onto my collar and swim with me as best you can, am I clear?”

Pete nodded and took Rex’s collar in his teeth.  “Gotcha,” he nodded.

Rex led him into the water.  “I’ll be back, Miss Trixie.  Until I return, stay as warm as you can.”

Trixie stared after them anxiously.  “Be careful,” she called.

As the water’s surface brushed against their chins, Rex stopped.

“Wh-wh-what’s the holdup?” chattered Pete.

Rex seemed hesitant to speak.  “I just want to say, Pete, you did the right thing this time.  You were very brave, and from what I heard of your father, he’d be proud.”

Pete was so surprised he almost lost his grip on Rex’s collar.  “Whrr…?”

But Rex seemed to have no interest in further conversation.  “Brace yourself!” he cried.

And the next thing Pete heard was water in his ears.

Rex maneuvered under the water with surprising skill, paddling through the calm currents at the edge and diving below some of the rougher swells.  Pete hung on for dear life, trying not to pass out as blood leaked out to be replaced by icy water seeping in.  As some of the frigid liquid flowed through his teeth and into his mouth, he could feel his tongue taking on the nature of a small glacier.  ‘Gotta… hang… on…’ he thought desperately.

At last they reached a place downstream where the river had frozen over.  “Waiht!” Pete called past his frozen tongue and through the mouthful of collar.  He tried to say, “Not the ice, over on the snow or our paws will stick,” but it came out, “Nrrt de ice!  Ovhhr on snu, rr puhs schtick!”

Rex nodded and guided them over to a part of the ice that was covered with soft, dry snow.  With a desperate heave, he clambered out and pulled Pete after him.“How did you know our paws would stick to ice?” he asked.

Pete panted.  “Thumpthing my dad taught me,” he lisped past his frozen tongue.

“Dad!  Pete!” came a loud bark.  Rex turned his head to see Toby running toward them.

“It’s all right, Toby.  He’s a bit beaten, but he is alive,” Rex called.  “I’m going back for Trixie now.  Stay here and keep Pete warm!”

Toby reached them and hunkered down next to Pete.  “You just watch yourself in there,” he warned his dad.  “If I tell Mom you drowned, she’ll send me to join you.”

Rex nodded, ran back up the bank to a spot near where the bank had crumbled, and dove back in.

“Y-you know,” Pete chattered as Toby did his best to shield him from the wind, “Your old



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October 13, 2015
Usa Male
Pete's turnaround was an interesting bit to write. When I first started developing him, he was largely based on a character of mine (not a very sell-rounded one, I'm afraid) whom I don't expect to ever see find Ms. Right. However, revisiting a show from my childhood - "McGee and Me" - gave me some inspiration, after which Pete became more like that show's main antagonist, Derrick (this is most evident in the Christmas installment of the Toby Series).

October 12, 2015
Usa Male
None yet, thanks!
Well well. This is the series that started me loving your writing work DT. This particular part is probably my favorite one of this series. and always will be. Love the way it builds tension but then all ends well. And of all characters I have to say Pete was the last of your guys that I EVER expected to have a successful relationship with ANYONE at all no matter their gender. Anyways. Fun read and brilliant writing all around. Oh and I'm about to reread all the others and actually review them this time so expect more reviews.

November 16, 2011
Usa Male
Animalia --> She should be in it. Maybe I forgot to list her in the cast.

June 30, 2011
Uk Male
Balto RP
Is luna not in this one?

February 15, 2010
Usa Male
riot --> With pleasure.

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January 20, 2010
O.O 8has been reading your stories secretly* write more!!!! please!!!

January 07, 2010
Usa Male
Skull --> lol I guess I have some affinity for plants. Of course, they seem to make good dog names, especially for girl dogs.

January 06, 2010
Usa Male
Site Builder
Notice the girls he thought of at the beginning of the story: Daisy and Oak. Need I say anymore? lol

September 14, 2009
Usa Male
Just --> Me too.

September 12, 2009
Usa Male
I want one now.

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