Double Love Part 5

Author : steele_rox

Date sent : May 23, 2007

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Twilight's kids, Milley, Dontay, Romeo, and Coby are all grown up but they still live with Twilight and her owners. Twilight is angry with her sister for killing one of her other pups, Karmen. Twilight wants revenge. Will she do something she is going to regret later? Find out in this story.

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Characters : 1375 visits



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Double Love Part 5
By steele_rox

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April 17, 2009
Newzealand
This one isn't as good as the others,unfortunatly.

May 25, 2007
Usa Female
thank you blue

May 24, 2007
Usa Female
okay

May 24, 2007
Uk
Rock of Ages
phooey i thought it was good well done *claps*

May 24, 2007
Sweden Male
I'm sorry but i most I agree witch the others. This was the
worst Double love story. I hope next part is better if it
comes one

May 24, 2007
Usa Male
I'm afraid I agree with Tala. Tessa was just a little bit
too overbearing to be believable this time around, you know?
Good effort, all the same.

May 24, 2007
Usa Female
okay....

May 23, 2007
Canada Female
I didn't think this was as good as your other ones, I think
you left the characters. In other words, let thei
personality's leave. Sorry, but, it didn't attract me.




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