Finale: One Last Chance

Author : redwolf03

Date sent : September 18, 2007

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : Kaila, Copper, Chase, and Dusty embark on a final journey to conquer their father's dark past and their own old enemies. Kaila's pack is in danger of being wiped out by old enemies and new. Her family turns out to help her, with some unexpected results. This is their last chance to learn what family means, and to stay together as one. This is the finale of the 'A Second Chance' series. Author's note: Copper's life after this Finale is continued in Dragon Tamer's 'Toby' series.

Length : Very long -

Characters : 16107 visits



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Finale: One Last Chance
By redwolf03

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April 16, 2012
Philippines
This was one of the best fanfiction that has ever been posted here. The "Second Chance" series has a most inspirational and morally educated story. It shows love,hatred,revenge,hope,and faith.

I hope you have a successful career as a writer. :)

April 12, 2012
Usa
This was one AMAZING fanfic! I could feel every emotion the characters felt. This story ble me away.

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January 02, 2011
wOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOw..............................
...... so long!

June 18, 2010
Norway Male
Touching,entertaining and inspiring. You make readers laugh, cry and so much more. Your writing days here may be over, but the memories will live on in your readers...and the sites archive;)

August 05, 2009
Usa
That was amazing it was the only fan fix where every thing was perfect. A great touching story interesting characters all while sticking to the theme set in your first second chance fanfic

That's good!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!

July 28, 2009
Usa Male
That story touched my heart, it was truely amazing. :cry:
When they sang 'Reach for the light' I swear I could hear them singing.

May 18, 2009
Usa Male
Whoa, this one's getting some GOOD feedback.

May 07, 2009
Sweden Female
Off Topicers
I give you a howl of honor and i truly hope you will become an author one day.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

April 26, 2009
Usa Female
Leader of the DarkDemonWolves
:howl: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I have no words to describe this! :allears: I cried with them, and laughed with them, and nothing is better than this!

March 29, 2009
Australia
This was definately my favourite fanfic out of the 'Second Chance' series and all the fanfics that I have read. This one I would rate at number one on the charts, metaphorically speaking. You have kept to the plot line slowly and easily, and it builds up to the very end of the story. The four that you previously wrote all fit together in one and it all comes together to bring the moral of the story. You did that very well. The love and heart is very well kept within the story as well; and Steele's truly evil side remains and for it to come down to this is a great way to end it for him. You have kept up the evil ways of Steele extremely well. The sad sequences are also done very well. I have to admit, I cried when Robin was lost and when Luka spoke to Taya and Ava before she died. :cry: It was just beautiful the way you did that. The theme comes down to Balto showing his children what family is all about: Love. Throughout the series, you have kept to that theme perfectly. This was a terrifically beautiful and tearful story. You should promote this story; seriously, mate.
lol

You are one of the best and most talented writers I have ever witnessed. I just love the way you write these stories, mate. You are an inspiration to all who wants to become novellists, personally speaking.

I have read all your other stories and they are just as good. Love your work, mate.

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