The Brown Hill Spirits (part 10)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : January 26, 2009

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : Life has moved on, and new connections are beginning to form within the pack, and not just between Achak and Hokee. But then things start to go downhill for poor Hokee when he gets sick and his wolf-side is put to the test. Also when Achak decides that he should pay his respect's to his mate's father, he makes an interesting discovery about the pup's past.

Length : Average -

Characters :
Nikki
Nikki
Kaltag
Kaltag
Luk
Luk
Ayashi
Ayashi
Dartanion
Dartanion
Star
Star
Muk
Muk
Takoda
Takoda
Nayeli
Nayeli
Olathe
Olathe
Boris
Boris
Hokee
Hokee
Achak
Achak
Kanook
Kanook
Balto
Balto
Tonrar
Tonrar
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The Brown Hill Spirits (part 10)
By dragonkitty411

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January 26, 2009
Kolton --> lol I'm doing a picture of them together. Once you see it, you'll see how alike they look.

Luna383 --> Thanks! 8D

DragonWings --> I hope I got him in character for that bit xD Glad you like it tho!

Lady_Jenna --> Stay tuned, it won't be long now lol

Beauty_Jenna --> Haha, she will. What ever will she do!

January 26, 2009
Usa Female
Gah, I was feeling myself choke up for a minute XD Poor Nayeli...Good to have her friend back, tho. And zepher(inward laugh), that dude has no guts. Always fleetfooted and timid. Betcha he won't talk to Nayeli 'till he gets really scared or somthin' aroudnt those lines. Awesome fic! been waitin' for this(though it wasn't as long as the others)

--Spiritwolf

January 26, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
As always, a great story!!! Great work and can't wait for more!!!!:P :P

January 26, 2009
Canada Female
Snap crackle pop
Whoa, Kayiya? Didnt expect that xD
Can't wait for teh next part! ^_^

January 26, 2009
Female
Loved it! Nayeli's gonna have a dilemma when she founds out that both Zepher and Hokee got a thang for her XD Both of you done a great job, know how to keep the reader tuned for the next part 8D

January 26, 2009
Usa Female
Wow Kayiya that was unexpectedlol I can't wait for the next part

January 28, 2009
Usa Female
Kaltag and...Kayiya? Haha, didn't think they'd be Hokee's mom and dad XD, also I thought is realy cute when little Nayile thought Hokee was going to die.

January 30, 2009
Uk Female
Wow, finally. Even though I'm late at reading it xD
For some reason, I just love the part where Achak says 'I knew your daughter' and Balto just says 'Which one?'
No idea why, but those two lines were so cute.

February 08, 2009
Smiley Sam --> Thank you! 8D I'm glad you thought it was unexpected.

Joker --> Haha me too. It was sad when he didn't D8

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