it brought tears to my eyes when nayeli said "hi again mommy" to the grave

I loved this series!

This is an outstanding new chapter.Really glad achak is starting to accept Hokee.Hope the new comes out soon.

wow!!! that was so... unexpected! Kayiya as Hokees mother and Kaltag as his father was brilliant!! fabulous writing as always. cant wait for the next part

XCelestial.Beex --> Thanks. I figured it was a pretty logical question to be asking some wolf he didn't know.

Iditarod --> Yeah. But it shall take an interesting turn

VividLegacy --> If you look at Kayiya's latest image, you see how alike she and her son look. Achak doesn't know Kayiya personally. He knows her name, and might know she's Kita's sister, but he's never met her. And Achak's pups are a little over 50% wolf, but you're right about Achak not seeing them as such.

I knew it, . Hokee looks way too much like Kaltag not to be, . But I never expected Kayiya, of all wolves. Whoa.Does Achak know Kayiya, or just Kita. And Nayeli. I love Nayeli. Her and Hokee would be so sweet together. And does Achak realise that his pups are 50% wolf? He probably does, but he just doesn't see them that way. Anyway, great work on this!

Haha! Now Achak can say to Hokee, "Your mother's sister was my mate's worst enemy." (Don't ask me why he'd want to say that, though. )


Anywho, great job once again, you two! I can't wait 'till the whole Nayeli/Hokee/Zepher thing comes to its climax!

Whoa. I never saw that coming, Kayya? Lol, nice.
I love Zephyr in this one, he's just so nicee and stuff. XD
Nice job! C: Can't wait for the next one.

wow Kayiya...eh so my question was finally answered. Very nice, the moment of Achak comforting Hokee was really sweet. Kiona will be missed tho, I'm looking forward to see Kayiya's story, anyway very nice fic Cat

Aww another Cliff hanger that sucks but I love how you made a love triangle and I kinda figured he was Kaltags son he did look alot like him. Im hoping Nayeli and Hokee get together they would make such and cute couple and Zepher seem to have abit of a stuck up atitude when it came to Hokee and Kayiya being the mother never saw that coming great fic you Draco and Cat and I hope to see a continuation soon. Im really looking forward to it.