expected.

 

            Kiona did not want to be inside the cave doing this. She was hot and in agonizing pain, even though Olathe, who was beside her, comforting her, insisted that it was cooler inside the cave than outside. It was true because the ground inside was always cooled by the shading and the only thing that made it warm was when many bodies dwelled inside (but luckily it wasn't too cold for the pups whenever they'd come out.) The soon-to-be mother whimpered loudly and the young silver wolf caregiver licked her head, trying to ease the pain, although there was little she could do. Kiona was in so much pain, Olathe often questioned if it was best that she had sought the help of her human to assist her with this birth, but it was too late for that now. The only help she had was her own.

 

            When the hybrid cried out loud, Olathe knew it was time for the first cub to be born. She looked under Kiona's tail and saw a tiny body trying to emerge. Olathe talked Kiona through this, giving her words of encouragement to keep going, because the hybrid was getting headaches from the stress aside from her entire body was experiencing. She pushed again, and finally, out came the tiny lump that would be cleaned into the form of a newborn pup. Olathe sighed in relief when she saw Kiona reach her head back abruptly to clean her first born. She had made it through the first pup, and there were surely more to come.

 

            Kiona gasped in horror in the middle of licking the sticky substance from the red-colored pup. Ayashi went to her side again and asked what was wrong as she realized what it was. Kiona was crying, close to hysterics, licking the pup more and more vigorously, trying to coax it to move, whimper, something, anything, but to no avail. Olathe breathed as she watched Kiona painfully cry out again, both mentally and physically, as the second pup was being born, and she sadly had Aya take the first born pup away, to try her best to get a reaction from the firstborn. It was no use. The first pup was dead.



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May 02, 2010
oh no! the ending scares meh!

WOW!!!! Achak finally showed some lovin! ha ha:)

Guest
Guest
April 14, 2010
SO GOOD BUT SO SAD!

April 23, 2009
Usa Male
i work alone
i really like it. but ussaly wolves dont carry the whole kill back to there weak and unforchnate. they ussally just carry back small portions for them.

May 22, 2008
Usa Female
Water Tribe
I read it anyway. Poor pup!!

May 22, 2008
Usa Female
Water Tribe
curses for pg-13 rating! I want to read it, but my mom will kill me.

Guest
Guest
November 27, 2007
I really liked this one!!! Good job!!!

November 01, 2007
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
OMG, are you trying to out-cliffhang me or something?
(Just joking . . . LOL) Anywho, wow . . . I just read all
of BHS so far and I second the demand for more.

Again, wow. I . . . gah, I have no idea what to feel
right now. Awesome job!

- Juuchan17

Guest
Guest
October 30, 2007
That was good,but a little sad.

October 12, 2007
Usa
Wind Swift Pack
Really nice so far:-) I'm going to read the first few, then
start on the fifth one again.

Guest
Guest
October 14, 2007
Whoa this was... okay the endin' was surprisin' but it was
so adorable XD Yay for some Kiona/Achak romance there!^^
Keep it up guys, you're goin' a fanstastic job!

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