The Brown Hill Spirits (Part 5)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : October 04, 2007

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Other

Description : "Time slowed its pace down to a crawl after the sound. Blood splashed through the air and scattered onto the snow." What is the outcome over the scene in the clearing? What will it mean for Achak, Kiona, and the entire pack? And what is to come afterwards? How will this effect the future...? (some content is an rp between Draco and Catwhohas14tails)

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The Brown Hill Spirits (Part 5)
By dragonkitty411

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May 02, 2010
oh no! the ending scares meh!

WOW!!!! Achak finally showed some lovin! ha ha:)

Guest
Guest
April 14, 2010
SO GOOD BUT SO SAD!

April 23, 2009
Usa Male
i work alone
i really like it. but ussaly wolves dont carry the whole kill back to there weak and unforchnate. they ussally just carry back small portions for them.

May 22, 2008
Usa Female
Water Tribe
I read it anyway. Poor pup!!

May 22, 2008
Usa Female
Water Tribe
curses for pg-13 rating! I want to read it, but my mom will kill me.

Guest
Guest
November 27, 2007
I really liked this one!!! Good job!!!

November 01, 2007
Usa Female
WQ > Balto > WoC
OMG, are you trying to out-cliffhang me or something?
(Just joking . . . LOL) Anywho, wow . . . I just read all
of BHS so far and I second the demand for more.

Again, wow. I . . . gah, I have no idea what to feel
right now. Awesome job!

- Juuchan17

Guest
Guest
October 30, 2007
That was good,but a little sad.

October 12, 2007
Usa
Wind Swift Pack
Really nice so far:-) I'm going to read the first few, then
start on the fifth one again.

Guest
Guest
October 14, 2007
Whoa this was... okay the endin' was surprisin' but it was
so adorable XD Yay for some Kiona/Achak romance there!^^
Keep it up guys, you're goin' a fanstastic job!

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