This fan fic is so cool! I really liked it. What I found was
the best part, is where you wrote about Kiona/Una wanting to
kill Aleu. My version of the red faced pup is in fact close
with Kodi, Dingo, Aleu and the other un named puppy. I was
really disappointed to find there wasn't a sequel in your
gallery. Goooooood jooooooob!!!

Telling the truth, I have a humongous rivalry like that one
with my young sisters. Me being the Kiona, and they are
practically twins of Alue!DX So, yeah, what I'm saying is, I like
it!

I love this one! I can partially identify with this one on
Kiona's side. Since she is my favorite fan character, after
all. Well done on this, too bad there's not a sequel. Either
way, good job! *paws up*

Ooo.This one sure was pretty good!

whoa that was cool

Great story!

Strawberry Splash: Glad you liked it! It was a two day romp
for me, so good luck if you ever see another one like that
again! Ha ha!

Brown Wolf: No, there is no
sequel. Cat wrote a fic that could be considered a
sequel/continuation to this one (it's on Fanfictionnow.com
under Balto), but it's much more violent than mine. I had
planned for this to explain the real reason why Kiona/Una
couldn't stand Aleu, so I guess I got it right! Thanks!

Chickawaii*canine: I don't even have siblings, but
I've observed them before, so I just tried to write how one
would feel in that situation. Ah, the work of a writer . . .
Thanks for reading!

Whoah! This was awesome J17 :D Fantastically written! You
are a natural when it comes to vivid descriptions! Yay Kiona
xD I can really feel her pain in this. I can't relate at
all, but I know it's awful having a sibling who's more loved
than you, once again, no I don't relate.

I
really, really loved this fic. Keep up the great work ^^
^__^

Wow. I love your style of writing, and the emotion in this fic! I
hated Kiona's way of thinking, but still good