the scruff. He whimpered as she did so. She then hurried to her den under a tree; the tree was old but still worked.

She set him down softly barely making any noise, “Cember I’m sorry I didn’t mean to yell I just was…over the edge.” Cember was cold; Vain acted as mother and licked Cember clean and dried. The den was fairly large; Kiltin had made most of it. Which made and worked so hard for her, knowing he won’t be there, when she would rest made her depressed.

Cember coughed, a few times, she sighed he most likely got sick from the rain. She felt like it was her fault how could she have slept like that, stayed asleep till it was downpour? Cember also wondered a bit from what she could tell; another wolf in the pack may have called him abomination. She didn’t really mean to isolate Cember but needed to till he could fend for himself.

Cember got past his fear and curled up next to his mother she was warm he was cold. Vain did her best to keep her son warm. After a time she found Cember fell asleep, she touched his nose with her own, Cember was warmer he was sick now perhaps in the morning he’d be better. She thought to herself hoping she was right.

She rested, but it hurt too, just even to rest; she was slightly cold, and to rest as well. She felt a lump in her throat, Kiltin was always warm, she would sleep next to him all the time, even on the hot days, she remember how much she loved his warmth, it was always pleasing, and it was gone now, why did she have to say goodbye it wasn’t fair, she didn’t know how to move on.

Writters commentary, about the 13 thingy yeah I wanted to be more creator like and make a new date system and it's really hard getting the days and mounths to work out and getting new names for like September rename it and that why? CAUSE I CAN! AND slightly BORED! AH HA! YAH!

Why did I have the fricken story like this sad story about a character fun better makes it interesting if you do it right, which I fail about 99 of of 100% WTF the names Cember, Kiltin, Vain, Helen well that's a normal name.. Cember because it's not a real name till now I made it yeah hopefully.... Kiltin well if I was thinking of names when celtic came into my mind after that celtic knights in rome went into my brain so NAME I thought of a name Kiltin ya, ya this is how Arcy thinks of odd names or goes looking for them. Vain, well I was looking at my arm and thought the veins and then thought of a quote I heard "you fight in Vain!" I think it was some vid game I used to have well Vain came up and uh the character, and devotion and over protective somewhat, I like the chacater Vain, strong minded somewhat xD Cember the intro thing was his point of view later so yeah. Sorry don't really have much to say oddly I kind of based this off of Land before time with the mud puddle when little foot finds that foot print and T-rex smashes his treestar so that's where I got the mud puddle I idea from.

Why do I have it rain, RAIN IS COOL! Thanks for time, if it was a wast all the betta! lol That's not my intent well I hope it was enjoyable. I plan to continue this sometime.