Now that was sweet.

Nice description. Really gets the message across.

Cool story!

This one you should keep. It's just a little convoluted,
which is a good thing in a love story. The only improvement
I could suggest is to make it longer.

Oh God! I love this story! Please do a sequel! I love the
Double Love Series!!! I still think Dash and Tessa would
have been better! Also, what does Dash look like? I want a
picture of him! Your author skills are very
impressive!!! Also,Things Kiona Doesn't Want Wants HER, reminds me of a problem of mine!!!! Also, I looked at the part of the story (Things Kiona Doesn't Want Wants Her) and you own a wolf/human named Kenny. I didn't see any wolf named Kenny in the story; Things Kiona Doesn't Want Wants Her.

AMAZING!

Ah, I LOVE Kodi and Dusty stories (pun intended). That was a
very interesting love triangle story, although triangle
would be a bit of an understatement here. It struck me as
being somewhat rushed concerning Kodi and Dusty's
relationship, but you've got some good writing otherwise.