Aleu - A grave mistake

Author : UKthewhitewolf

Date sent : April 20, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Description : My version of what happened to Aleu after she crossed the "great water" with the pack.

Length : Short -

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Aleu - A grave mistake

By UKthewhitewolf

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Tala	April 28, 2007

Awesome, even though I don't realy like Aleu, it was still
good.


Jake Razor	April 23, 2007

Nice story, but you seem to oeruse the "Enter" key.


Carolina Wolf	April 21, 2007

Dafinatly loved the story!! I like short storys with a
punch, and yours certenly deliver that!!

Buddy,
you have GOT to work on you'r paragraph, as they are too
broken up. But as far as plot is concerned, its a home
run!!

Heck, I loved that tragic part of death,
you are very creative!
Write on!!!!!
LOL

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