great fic

You know... I like how you made Jenna do that ' trick '
again, like she did on Steele! Great work!

thanks kaltag

I know I didn't mean for it to be THAT big. Sorry

Couldn't you make the text bigger it was a little
to big for me but other wise it was a good story

This one is MUCH better than "Balto's Loss." You showed
regard for Bato and Jenna's loyalty to each other in this
one, which is very important. Only, what would Jenna find
attractive in Kaltag, anyway? Write more like this one, work
on clarity, and there's no telling how well you could do!