room, and laughed.

“Hey, you caught him!” Star said. “Steele can’t bully anyone in there.”

“Steele is the most malevolent, “ Kaltag started ranting. “The most fiendish, the most sinister, the most…..”

“He’s a bad dog!” Star butted in.

“You said it!” Kaltag said, patting Star on the back.

THE END

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1 2

Go to the writer's section

This fanfic was rated G (Everyone).

Comments

1562 visits

Report a problem

Report this fanfic

Last comments


Jake Razor	February 07, 2012

This is pretty darn good for a beginner, although the bit with the yellow paint was a little too contrived since Steele had only just used that insult on him two minutes ago. It would make more sense if Steele had used that remark before.

Return

Not connected : To be able to post a message site, you must be connected.

Register on the site!