the way they'd just come, all the others turned too, Stitch, Mist, Ben and Moonlit were closest to the the path they'd walked down, something was approaching, and fast, they all flicked their ears as they listened, as something came into view they thought it was a wolf, it's silhouette was like a wolf but something was wrong about it, none of them could figure out what it was...at first, when the wolf came to the bottom of the hill they could see what was wrong, half of the wolf's face was missing, the right side of his face looked normal, even though it was spattered with blood but the left side was missing, all they could see was the wolf's skull, blood was flowing from many open wounds all over the wolf's body, skin was also missing from it's right front leg, they could easily see the bones and muscles in it's leg, it also had a large open wound on it's left side which it's ribs were visible through, they were all so busy studying the wolf's appearance they forgot it was attacking them, it ploughed into Mist's side then grabbed Ben's leg swinging him aside then bit down hard on Snowy's shoulder, Valo regained his composure first and attack the wolf, he grabbed it's tail and pulled it off Snowy then slammed it into the ground and pressed his paw into it's chest and bit it's neck, Jake helped Snowy up and Moonlit helped Mist and Ben get up then they all ran back to their den while Valo fought with the wolf, Valo and the wolf ripped at each other until the wolf finally ran off, Valo ran after his pack, when he arrived Jake was licking Snowy's wound clean while Tenaka and Moonlit were helping Mist and Ben recover from the attack while Sarchie was trying...and failing to calm down a hysterical Stitch,                                                            "What was that?", Jake gasped when he saw Valo arrive,             "I don't know", Valo growled as he realised that not only did not know what the wolf was but that it had gotten away from him, "That was not of this world", a deep voice exclaimed, the whole pack looked toward Valo's rock where a large white wolf with blue markings stood proudly with a white wolf and black wolf that both had wings landed either side of the rock and bowed their heads respectfully to Valo,                                                             "If it was'nt of this world then where is it from?", Valo asked the wolf,                                                                                  "It is from the world of demons", the wolf answered,                     "Demons?", Valo raised his eyebrow, the wolf nodded,                 "I am Zarnesti, I was hoping this would'nt happen, I am sorry this had to happen to your pack Valo", Zarnesti started to explain, "How did you know my name? and what do you mean?", Valo questioned further,                                                               "I am a spirit and a demon master known as Lord Loss has found his way through a rift from the demon world he dominates to this world, I had been hoping he would return but it seems he has other ideas" Zarnesti answered,                                                    "So what was the wolf I fought?", Valo asked,                        "That was a servant of the Dark Lord, it was no wolf, it has just taken the form of one, that was a Demonai, they have no name and are born only to serve Lord Loss, they are ruthless, you were lucky to escape", Zarnesti answered again, Valo thought about what Zarnesti had just said,                                                 "What does this 'Lord Loss' want exactly?", Valo finally asked,    "He wants to rule this world, to do this he needs a sacrificial wolf pack that he will slaughter so he can release his hordes to take over this world", Zarnesti answered him,                           "What's with his name?", Jake whispered to Valo in the hope he would ask the question to Zarnesti, but he need'nt have,          "His name, 'Lord Loss', reflects him, he is a lonely being, he enjoys despair and suffering of others", Zarnesti answered before Valo had the chance to repeat the question,                                          "What are these 'Demonai'?", Valo questioned,                       "They were once regular wolves like you until Lord Loss captured them and tortured them, they are no longer real beings, after being subjected to his lair in the centre of the Demon world they have become creatures no longer of this world, in our world it takes 2 months to turn them but in the Demon world 2 months is an entire century, after that length of time in the Demon world you become like them, they feel no more pain, no more hurt only sorrow and sadness, if they fail on an errand Lord Loss sent them on he deserts them and this is when they remember, they become depressed and he feeds from their suffering until they finally die after 3 centuries of sorrow", Zarnesti answered him, Snowy shuffled close to Jake,                                                           "I know it's upsetting but it seems the Demon Lord has chosen the pack he wishes to sacrifice", Zarnesti told them, they all jumped,  "That will not happen!", Valo exclaimed at his comment, he was'nt going to let his pack be destroyed just after he's gained it,          "I know and to do this you will need help, that is why we're here", Zarnesti gestured to the two winged wolves and they both nodded their heads,                                                                        "So how do we stop this happening?", Valo asked them,           "You must send Lord Loss and the Demonai back to the Demon World, they make their lair in the Dead Plains in Clawe Valley", Zarnesti informed them, Valo sighed,                                     "Clawe Valley is in the heart of the Shadow Lands", Valo sighed, "Yes",                                                                               "How do we send them back if we even make that far into the shadow lands?", Valo



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May 09, 2007
Uk Female
Rock of Ages
Gah!, I tried to get the writing looking right but it never
works!!! , sorry guys.....

May 07, 2007
Usa Male
Yeah, this is an interesting storyline, although with the
gruesome description of that Demonai and so forth you might
want to bump it up to PG (just a thought). Also, like
DakotaWerewolf said, the paragraph structure is a little
scrambled and very hard to read.

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May 07, 2007
This was good although there was spacing where there
shouldn't be (like long ones, probably attempts to start
another paragraph) and it seems to skip pages. Other than
that, I think this is my favorite of your stories




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