The Chronicles of Darkness, Part 1: The beginning

Author : UKthewhitewolf

Date sent : May 06, 2007

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Epic

Description : The first in my series of stories, you'll really have to read it to get it, there's waaaay to much to explain quickly

Length : Average -

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The Chronicles of Darkness, Part 1: The beginning

By UKthewhitewolf

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UKthewhi tewolf	May 09, 2007

	Rock of Ages

Gah!, I tried to get the writing looking right but it never
works!!! , sorry guys.....


Jake Razor	May 07, 2007

Yeah, this is an interesting storyline, although with the
gruesome description of that Demonai and so forth you might
want to bump it up to PG (just a thought). Also, like
DakotaWerewolf said, the paragraph structure is a little
scrambled and very hard to read.


Guest	May 07, 2007

This was good although there was spacing where there
shouldn't be (like long ones, probably attempts to start
another paragraph) and it seems to skip pages. Other than
that, I think this is my favorite of your stories

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