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| February 01, 2009 | ||
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| Small but Determined |
It could have been longer, and with better grammar. Plus, the story
was kind of hard to follow along with. You kept skipping all over the
place. Otherwise, it was pretty good. |
| June 30, 2007 | ||
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Hm. I think the canine connection needs improvement, and that princess bit comes out of nowhere. Still, the story does have potential if you tweak it a little here and there. |