It's kinda hard to betray someone if it wasn't of your own will. As my teacher would say, "I'm not gonna say that was stupid, but that was STUPID."

I understand what you mean. (I personally think it's my
worst fic in terms of style.) However, if you didn't like it
(assuming you read the summary) why did you go ahead and
read it?
And, if I may defend Jenna, she was
exhausted from the run and it's likely (since she hardly
remembers what she said or did) that Kale just...well...took
what he wanted.
And yet, this seems to be my
most-commented fic. That, to me, means that more people are
into this sort of shattered relationship fic than true-love
fics, which disappoints me. I've always loved Balto/Jenna fics...
Thank you for your input regardless. Rock on.

I'm not going to sugar-coat it, I was appalled at first to
find you writing a "Jenna cheats on Balto" story. I can't
say I enjoyed one word of it, but I can say that Isaw one
underlying message that should certainly be emphasized:
Cheating hurts everyone, every time.

I loved it! Consider doing a sequel? How can Jenna do that
to Balto?!

This was a well-written story. Jenna would never cheat on
Balto, but if she would, this is a great representation.
Adultery is a horrible sin, and I'm glad you portrayed well
the pain, grief, and other consequences that can happen when
something as sacred as faith to a spouse is broken, and that
you didn't write the story as if doing it were alright. You
did a great job on showing what the characters were feeling
and thinking!

i actually enjoyed this one.
I'm not usually the type
whos interested in jenna cheats kinda thing,but I'm making
an exception here.
I actually think your not only my
favourite mod(no offense to other mods),but my favourite
writer,too.(Again,no offence).
YOUR AWESOME!

Hey guy, that fight scene with Jenna and Kale are verry good
done!!! When I readed this I just can imagine how this was
going one!!!!

Well, honestly, I didn't relish the thought of that either,
but I thought I'd mix things up a bit in my series. There
aren't always happy endings in real life, so why here?
In any case, I've revised Betrayal a bit. No huge
changes, but the implications of who did what have changed.

-LWf

Great fic.To be honest,I would hate her for the rest of my life for
that Betrayal.

God, that was so awesome!!! You rock! It was so well
written, so detailed, and it seemed realistic in a way. I
didn't like the idea of Jenna cheating on Balto, but that's
okay! I wonder if I enjoyed it as you did writing it, but I
may never know the answer to that so 5 stars! ~ Duchess

This is my absolute fav fan fic! It is awesome! I can't
believe Jenna slept with Kale! Balto is soooo much better!

A wonderful fanfic!!! period

GREAT STORY!

Wonderfl, just wonderful. I think you realy had a good
ending, explaining the rest of what happened int he Boiler
Room. You are an amazing writer, keep it up!!!

Could You make a sequal to this fan fiction? When Kale comes back and kidnaps Jenna's pups? Plleeeaaaasssee?

Kale sure was INTERESTING. *makes face* Besides being evil, he was a pretty good character. Yeah, bringing him back in would be a good twist!

That was a really good story but i think you should make another story when balto realises he cant raise Kale's pups and he goes and has an affair with another dog and jenna finds out.What do you think about that idea?Anyone can comment on what they think of my idea!

that story was filled with things that i couldnt predict! what a story! keep up the good work

That's great Wolf Queen! Maybe we can mix our ideas together! (I wanted Kale to come back and kidnap Jenna's pups!)

Marvellous! This si actually the first fic I read when I found this site, and it did indeed motivate me to start writing my own! Your a fabulous writer, and I eagerly await more!

nice job.this is one is one of my favrites.how it turns out that Kale got what he wanted and tried to kill Jena at the end.Jena is not an idiot cause she told him that she had a mate.Kale thougt she was an idiot.

It never gets old, my friend. Keep it up. I'm going to do a trailer for A New Hope and I'll make you doing something (scratches head) but I'm not sure yet.

Very touching story. Cute, i love how it was written :3 *favies*

Lol i thought it was cute xD Don't ask Lol

Good story.

Boy am I glad that every thing turned out ok for Balto and Jenna! *wipes sweat off forhead* I'm glad that they remaied together in spite of what happened.