in the begining

Author : luvin(L) balto 4 eva(L)

Date sent : April 02, 2007

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : This is about balto and his parents and how he got left on the boat i cant promise you it is good though

Length : Very short -

Characters : 625 visits



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                  PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)
in the begining
By luvin(L) balto 4 eva(L)

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This fanfic was rated PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned).


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April 14, 2007
Female
Erm, I agree with what Dragon Tamer said, quite disturbing.
I wasn't expecting that when I started reading it. o.0 Um,
you could improve on puntuation and paragraphs, and the
stories would be much more easier to read.

April 02, 2007
Usa Male
Could you add some punctuation, please? It's almost
impossible to read. And no offense, but that was REALLY disturbing. I gotta admit, though, it's original.




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