come out here?'
'To help you and Grandpa.' said Elise.
Bailey looked at his daugheter with kind but firm eyes for a moment.
'Can I still live with Grandpa?' asked Elise, staring up at Bailey with big hopeful eyes. Bailey thought for a moment, not knowing what to say. Candy walked up behind him. Bailey looked at his 'sister' and she smiled at him and nodded.
'Ok!' said Bailey. Elise jumped up at her fathers paws and hugged him. She stood up, a little shakily, and ran over to Balto. She climbed up onto Balto's back like she was a little cat and jumped onto his face.
Bailey hugged Balto, Jenna and the rest of his family and told Elise to be good. She agreed to but soon went back to her moodyish ways. Except when she was with Balto. Then she'd been the sweetest, friendliest little pup ever.
blake, sandy, miracle, peggy, dialo, jeff, elise, scarlett, dipstick, bailey, candy, kenny, amber, syrus, saba, dingo are copyright to me
balto, jenna, steele, kodi are copyright to universal studio
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Nice new story! I think that's the first one I've read with Jenna having an evil sister. As for what you said about the adjustments to the previous story, " is technically the right way to do quotation marks. ' is used for a quote within a quote, if you see what I mean. Anyway, keep writing! |