hiya
thanks for pointing out the mistakes. i've
changed the him to her (i was tired when i wrote this story)
but i'm not too bothered about raven being a girl's name or
a boy's name. it just kida popped into my head anyway. and i have never done my quotation marks like " only ever like this '.
well, thanks for reading the story

Wonderful story! But I noticed a few glitches you might want to fix. To start off, "Raven" is usually a girl's name from hat I know (at least that's how it is according to Teen Titans). You're quotation marks should be like "this" instead of 'this.' And near the bottom of page 1 you used the word "him" in
reference to a female. Please correct that one before someone
mistakenly reports your story for improper content (beleive
me, it can happen). Beyond that, you've got something good here.