Oh rickity crickity boat,

 who's been here a long,long time.

 I wish see your past, a long,long time ago.

 Did it carry bags of flour?

 Or bricks to build a tower?

 Or goods for Nenana?

Well,there's one thing I know about you,

Oh rickity,crickity boat.

You ARE the home of my dad right now!

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 In a way,I feel bad for you,boat.

For your future is terrible.

 Sooner or later,you'll be ruled by the dirt

and covered by the snow.

Never able to show any goodness to anyone I know.

 Anyway...

I wish I could see your past,

 a long,long time ago,

wise boat.



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March 17, 2007
Pretty good. The boat doesn't have much attention.

March 17, 2007
Great poem...

March 14, 2007
Canada Female
Unalaq Pack
uhhhhi just love it!!!!!

March 13, 2007
Canada Female
Unalaq Pack
i read that agian,it was soooooo good!!!!!

March 11, 2007
Usa Female
Thanks!

March 11, 2007
Usa Male
Not bad. I wondered once how the boat got marooned but I
never really thought about its history.

March 11, 2007
Canada Female
Unalaq Pack
great poem




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