Very nice! Well-thought out, I loved it.

I don't now many over Balto and the history before the first
film but i think that your story the right thing is. Maby
are died jenna's parents and have she a brother.

Pretty good, but if I may give a little critique, I think
you should have done more with this. You are missing a lot
of possibilites here, like what happened to her brother, and
whatit was like when she first was with Rosie.