Star lived with Marcia who was sound asleep. The sky was blood red. Hot smoke filled Marcia's room. Steele came out of it and laid on the foot of the bed,"Oh, Marcia. I'm sorry. I'm so very sorry." He heared an evil voice:Steele. He looked around to see everything so calm and blue.
"Steele, you can go home now." He saw a blue orb that has Adele's calm voice.
"You said I-"
"Steele, you gave your life for her and Star."
"Kind of. What will happen-"
"Say your good-byes." He came near the girl.
"Steele, is that you?"
"Yeah. How are you feeling?"
"All better. You?"
"I came to say good-bye."
"Where are you going?"
"On a little trip. I want you to do something. Take care of Star. I think he has a liking for you." She pet the sleeping dog.
"Don't worry. Will you ever come back?"
"Of course. Good-byes aren't forever." She pet his muzzle.
"Then, good-bye, Steele."
"Go back to sleep." she did as he said. He got off the bed and walked to the orb that turned to a staircase to heaven.
"Come home, Steele." When he got up there, he had this feeling that heaven wasn't half bad.
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| May 24, 2011 | ||
wonderful and SUPER SAD. its basiclly a short version of All Dogs Go
to Heaven with Steele as Charlie and Star as Itchy. |
![]() | March 14, 2007 | |
Aww.. i like ADGTH, but this was ... well... little bit unussual. I like it, but... nah, never mind. Keep up good work! |