Notes: This has the somewhat universe of one of my fav movie All Dogs go to Heaven (First one for now.)
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Chapter 1:
Steele was all alone in the boiler room, his fans left him, Balto the half-breed became a famous head sled dog and Steele was nothing more then a stray. A couple of years passed by. The rouge Steele was walking around the little town of Nome and got caught by a person,"Walking around town without a human, Steele?"
"My human will be here in a minute." The black malamute lied. Of course knowing that humans can't understand a word of the dog languge, he led Steele to a small pound. The food there wasn't like the food at home. When he was at home, he had crunchy dog food and a bone now and then, even a sasuge. But at the pound, it was just sloppy food and a bowl of water.
"Hey, Steele!" His ears perked up. He looked at the back wall whitch was just a clear wall to see the outside world. It was Star.
"Oh no. Please tell me he's not going to save me."
"I'm here to save you!" He dug the earth to make a tunnel from the outside world to the inside of the pound. What seems like an eternity for Steele, the tunnel was finally done and he was soon outside. They walked to the boiler room to see all the dogs talking and laughing. Steele had a little smile.
"What do you say what do you know?"
"Hey do know what do you say?" Star changed his words.
"Look at them, Star."
"Maybe we should come back and enter again." They laughed and saw one of their friends.
"Steele," said Kaltag,"is that you? We all heared you were in the pound."
"No, I'm not in some pound! Right, Star?" He snapped and chewed on a bone.
"Yeah, that's right," agreed Star,"I got him out."
"Everythings so splendind, so magnificent, so impressive..." Nikki thought of words to describe something.
"Everythings going great with Balto around." Star interuppted him. His prize: a bonk on the head. Kaltag looked at the chewed up bone.
"Can you spare a couple of bones for old times sake?"
"Why settle for the sake when you can have the whole bake?" He reached inside a paper bag and threw large bones for all the dogs.
"I'm proud of you, buddy!" Complimented Star.
"You can't keep a good dog down!"
"Oh no you can't!" agreed Star.
"Where this pup is going, is up!" Steele climbed to the top of a pile of boxes and overlooked all the dogs in the ally. Everyone was laughing, howling, talking and having fun. Steele thought in his head:
Move over wolf-dog. The leader of the pack is back in town.
He was walking someplace and found Balto,"Hello, lobo."
"Name's Balto. I thought you were in the pound. That's what all the dogs say you are."
"Listen, I was the leader of this whole pack. But you are. So you have to back down."
"I'm not the leader I just lead the sled team."
"Meet me tommorrow at the old mountain in the outskirts of town." Balto had a confused look on his then turned around to go home. Steele walked inside an alley to wait for tommorrow.
Chapter 2
The next day, Balto was sitting on a mountain side waiting for Steele,"Why do you want me me to be up here?"
"Because, wolf-dog, we both can't be leaders of this sled dog pack."
"I told you, I'm nothing more then the leader of the sled team." Steele didn't listen. He just lunged at balto and began to fight. Just after a few minutes, Balto flipped Steele over. Sending him down the mountainside to an ocean below. Steele was long gone. Balto's mouth dropped, went down to see if Steele was still there. He wasn't. The wolf-dog lowered his ears and decided to walk home.
Meanwhile for Steele, he found himself not in the ocean but in a cloudy tunnel. He passed through a gate and landed on something soft as a cloud. In fact it was! His eyes widened. He looked around for the mountain or at least Balto. It was no use,"Where am I?"
"You're now at the pearly gates and about to wait for judgement." A light purple husky with a piece of yellow hair covered her left eye.
"Did you say judgement?"
"Not to worry Steele. You'll go to heaven. All Dogs go to heaven. Because did you know unlike humans, dogs naturally sweet, loyal and kind?"
"Thank heavens that's true."
"Follow me. You're in a place with no more rat race."
"Ok. at least it's a place with no more sled dog races."
"Order and calm instead."
"I can handel that."
"Let me welcome you," she spun on a cloud behind a desk,"to being dead." She took out a large book and looked through it.
"What?! You mean I'm-"
"Stone cold and hard like a rock I'm afraid. But let me keep looking here."
"I've been murdered."
"I'm having some troubles of finding loyalty. It says that you: Cheat, lie and steal."
"He killed me. I don't wanna die," She took out his paw, put it in ink and stamped it in the book,"You got the wrong guy. I was in a fight with a dirty rat actully this rat was a dog. Yet he's more like a wolf. He's a wolf-dog. May I talk to the Superior? Tell me this is all a dream!" She put on a pair of wings and a little halo on him.
"You'll have a splendind time here."
"You've got a wrong husky."
"Laughing and singing all day."
"It's not my time yet. Send me back to Nome, Alaska!" He tore off his wings and threw away the halo.
"Yes it is. We know everything."
"Dead at the prime of my life. Balto, when I get my paws on him-" he looked around him,"hey, is this the watch department?"
"Kind of," she took a collar that looked like his golden collar with a watch and had the name Steele on it,"this watch is your life," she opened up the watch,"it stopped."
"Can you wind it up?"
"Send you back? Of course not." He looked through the book of his life.
"These people know everything. So there are no surprises around here?"
"No." They both sat on a cloud close to each other.
"Listen, do you wanna dance? If I let's say be in a movie or whatever in the near future you'll tell me?"
"We know how the movie and stuff all work out."
"You've got rythem. Unusual for a husky such as yourself."
"Thanks for the compliment."
"So planned, so ordered, I need a suprise once in a while," he looked at his collar watch float behind the huskey angel,"do you know what I need?"
"What?" Steele grabbed the coller watch.
"Ever heared of Brazil, their throb and my thrill? Never been there, but someday I will. They have advenure and danger, but there's love in me for a stanger. May I be surprised?"
"You'll have plenty of surprises in heaven." She grabbed the watch. He took off his golden coller and put in on her to make her come closer.
"Today there's sun, they said there be snow. All said and done, it's fun not to know. What keeps my heart humming, might be guessing what's coming."
"So you want to be surprised." She put the golden coller down. They were soon flying across the night sky.
"I didn't see to catch your name." He had the coller watch behind him.
"Adele."
"Tell me, Adele. Do you like surprises? Because I got one for you."
"Yes and thank you. When will I see it?" He wound up the coller watch.
"Wait and you'll see."
"Steele, what's that behind you?"
"For once will you and I-"
"Don't you even think about it!"
"Be surprised?!" He fell back to Earth.
"Steele!" He traveled down the tunnel and into the river. He got out, rinsed himself dry and heared Adele's voice:You can't ever come back.
He looked to see his watch open and simply closed it. He sneered at the starry sky before going back into town.
Chapter 3
Steele forgot where Nikki and Kalatag lived. But he knew about Star. He went through the doggy-door to get inside and the other doggy-door to see Star sleeping in a kennel in the backyard,"Star, wake up." He did and all Steele got was a scream.
"Get away to me!" He untied the rope connected to his coller and kennel then ran for his life. But Steele caught him
"What wrong with you, little twerp?"
"Everyone said that you were dead."
"Not my time yet."
"Dogs really miss you."
"I know."
"I bet your master must be really worried."
"I know, let it out."
"If you're here, that means you're a-" He screamed at the top of his lungs, Steele cupped his mouth.
"No you idiot. I'm not dead. When I take my paw away, I want you to be quiet." He let go and he laid on the snow covered ground.
"I'm the brains of the pack. But when that wolf-dog came about, it was all over. I was under."
"That's right. We're going to go under. Way under."
"No. I don't want to go under business or that type of under. I think we tried sharing the fame, but he dosen't wanna share."
"No, Steele. You didn't want to share. We could take your fame else where. How about the Himalayas?"
"I hate that place. Too cold." Steele put his head over his paws.
"No, there's a little country called Tibet. Get it? To bet?" He rolled his eyes and tossed around a small rubber ball near him.
"Wait, Balto dosen't know I'm alive."
"Neither does the sled team." He had an evil smirk and tossed the ball up and down.
"You know, Star, there are two types of dogs around here. Ones that take revenge and one who are happy go lucky. Balto's one of the happy ones. But I'm a revenger. I'll make him suffer...slow. Soon, I will be top dog again."
"Steele, I always hear a monster. Maybe that will give you your little dream."
"You hear a monster? Where?"
"At the other side of town. It sounds creepy. It's like a moaning sound." Steele had another one of his smiles and threw the ball.
"This gives me an oh so good idea." He rubbed his paws together. We're going to visit a certin something or someone.
The next morning, the two dogs walked at the other side of town and heared a moaning sound.
"Hear that?" Their ears perked up. Steele saw nothing more then a moaning kid walking from an ally.
"Star, see this."
"I don't wanna see it."
"Look!" Star did.
"It's a kid."
"More specific."
"I can't get any specific."
"Let's say, girl, orphan, moaning from hunger." He padded towards her.
"Where are you going?"
"I'm uh, going to help her."
"Do what?"
"Take Balto
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| May 24, 2011 | ||
wonderful and SUPER SAD. its basiclly a short version of All Dogs Go
to Heaven with Steele as Charlie and Star as Itchy. |
![]() | March 14, 2007 | |
Aww.. i like ADGTH, but this was ... well... little bit unussual. I like it, but... nah, never mind. Keep up good work! |