The Brown Hill Spirits (Part 7)

Author : dragonkitty411

Date sent : December 06, 2007

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Other

Description : Just what will the new pup's fate be within the pack? Achak isn't happy with the new hybrid, the situation growing only worse as an accident occurs. Will there ever be an understanding the two mates, or will it end bitterly?

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The Brown Hill Spirits (Part 7)
By dragonkitty411

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Guest
Guest
July 20, 2009
Kiona really cut deep with that comment about Achak's father...
great job on the story, I really felt sad for Hokee.
you grils make the best dramatic fan fics.

December 27, 2007
Usa Male
not bad

December 21, 2007
Usa Female
Senior Mod
Cat--> very true, though you find out later it wasn't the
wolves that killed his family, that they were just in the
wrong place at the wrong time. XD Ya'll just have to keep
reading and find out if he changes in the end or not >D

December 21, 2007
Well in a way it is based on real life situations People
get bitten by a dog and they're always afraid of them, even
if they're not gonna bite. And in Wolf's Rain Quent's family
was killed by a pack of wolves and decided to kill as many
off as he possibly could because he hated them so much.
Achak's attitude will take a turn, but whether its for the
worst or for the best is going to have to be unknown

December 13, 2007
Skygirl --> Hehe, thats every omega's role Don't worry,
his life's pretty good compared to most. DragonWings -->
You'll see. Everyone else -->Thank you! And the 8th chapter
will be up soon :D

December 10, 2007
Usa Female
the new puppy is sooooo cute, I don't know why but I just
love him! Lol, poor Shiro, I have a soft spot for him.
He's picked on by everyone even the pups. V.V And he can't
disipline them. I wanna hug Shiro. I love you guys'
stories, and keep it up!!

Guest
Guest
December 09, 2007
Please make more, NOW!!!

December 09, 2007
Usa Female
Looking for one to take me in
Yes!!! Make more or I'll come make you buster!

December 08, 2007
Usa Female
Inactive Member/Retired Mod and Sourcecaster
Truly wonderful. It's engaging and filled with detail and
plot twists. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter ^.^

December 07, 2007
Global Moderator Usa Female
Cat, you and Draco never cease to amaze me. This was deep
and intense, filled with emotion... I was actually crying in
some parts. Anyway... *sniffs* nicely done! I look forward
to the next.

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