Special Thanks To:
-Kelev wfor helping me with the script,
-DrewTheWolf for letting me use her character Anna in this story,
-CatWhoHas14Tails for letting me use her character in this story

Iron, Cobalt (c)CatWhoHas14Tails
Anna (c)DrewTheWolf Titanium (c)LadyJenna


...Balto left Jenna with puppies to give her refreshment. He went for a walk to think about his newborn pups, and the one, Tina, who was weak. While walking around the town, he saw a black little dot. There was lots of snow around this dot. He was curios about what is it. He went down to this thing, dig out the snow. He was suprised  from what he saw. A little puppy was sleeping outside without his parents. Balto took him to his boat. He put the puppy into his warm blanket and then he went to Jenna.
"Jenna...Jenna!" Balto called out.
"What is it Balto?" Jenna replied.
" Hi....how are the pups?" Balto started.
(Jenna)" Puppies? They are fine...Tina feels better, people gave her something, now she joined her brothers and sisters and she started eating.  She was very hungry...What happen? I think you came to me not only to ask me how the puppies are doing?"
(Balto)" Yeah, you're right. I was on my way to home when I found something..."
(Jenna)" What? Is there something wrong?"
(Balto)" No...not really... I found little pup sleeping on the snow... There was no parents around. I think he got lost...I took him with me, he could die there"
(Jenna)" Yes, of course, where is he now? Is he big or like our ones?"
(Balto)" He's very much like ours... maybe a little bit older"
(Jenna)"Bring him here then... Let me give him something to eat, he must he starving"
(Balto)" Ok...Oh, Jenna..."
(Jenna)" What Balto?"
(Balto)"I'm so glad I have you"
(Jenna)" I love you too, Balto..."
    While Balto and Jenna were taking care of their new pup, there was something going on in Steele's family. Anna didn't live in one house with Steele, she had her owners. Steele was excited because Anna was expecting his new puppies. She wasn't feeling well. The puppies were so big that they couldn't go out so quickly as she would like to.
    Finally they came out. Four cute puppies. There were 3 boys and a girl. Licking them on their little bodies Anna could only think how Steele should be here, with their new family. Her master was about to name their pups that will probably stick with them for long.

Anna's firstborn was a black, brown and white girl, which was named Susie. She happened to be the only girl in the litter. The second pup was also mainly black, having some tan and white markings. Anna's owner named him Cobalt. He was proud of Anna having Steele's pups and wanted to reflect it by giving the boys names of metals, just like Steele. The tan border collie loved the name straight away. Third pup, although the second youngest, was the smallest out of the boys. It was obvious the pup got Anna's petite body, but the man knew the pup was going to grow big and strong, as pups tend to do. He named the pup after one of the strongest transition metals, Titanium. The last pup, which resembled Steele in a way although being same color as Anna was named Iron. Anna smiled at mentioning her youngest baby's name, knowing Steele would love it. 

    Balto came to Jenna and gave her little sleeping puppy. Jenna took him to her warm furry belly and showed him the way to get to milk. He quickly found it and then ate like little bear. Jenna said:
" Now we have to give him a name. He looks like border collie"
(Balto)" Yes....Let us call him....."
(Jenna)" Jusper!"
(Balto)" Yes! Jusper....."
(Jenna)"My beautiful little Jusper.....I will never leave you darling..."
(Balto)" Our son......."

    Some weeks later Jenna's little ones started to come outside to play. They were curious about what surrounded them. Jenna and Balto had to keep an eye on all of them, because they never knew what idea could come to their puppies minds. Their seven little doggies loved to play outside, specially Jusper, so whenever there was a chance, he went outside. While Balto and Jenna were busy looking after their fast  growing pups, Anna had to do most of the job alone. Steele was a popular dog which prevented him from seeing the pups as often as a father should. He wasn't the kind of dog that had his fatherly instincts in his blood. His own father didn't pay much attention to his kids which affected Steele's attitude towards pups. However, despite that, he managed to visit the pups once in a while, especially to see his sons. Steele was very excited to have sons like Cobalt and Iron as they resembled his own presence. He always focused on them to make sure they grow to be as strong and handsome as him. Titanium was the one that got to see Steele the least as he was soon adopted. Never being visited by his father at his new place, Titanium decided to become like Steele without his help. The only daughter Susie however, always wanted to please Steele, so she tried to imitate Iron, the most favored pup.

    One day while Balto and Jenna's puppies were playing outside, Susie came to her mum and said:
" Mommy! Can I go outside to play, please?"
(Anna)" Yes, of course, you can play outside......"
(Susie)" Thanks mum! See you later!"
 Anna didn't know that she is not talking about her and her brothers. She meant herself. Alone......
Susie went outside happy, chasing butterflies, and then she found that she's not near her home, and she cannot see it. Then her play was't so nice. But her scaredness went away when she saw seven little doggies playing on the beach. She went to join them.
(Susie)" Hi there! Can I play with you?"
No one could see her because everybody were busy. Then Jusper saw her looking with bored eyes.
(Jusper)" Hi! Do you want to play with us?"
(Susie)"  Yeah, suuuuure!!!!"
(Jusper)" So come on! What's your name?"
(Susie)" My name's Susie"
(Jusper)" Hi Susie! I'm Jusper. Do you live here?"
(Susie)" Yes, here.....some where here..."
(Jusper)" Ok, so you can stay longer?"
(Susie)" Err...I don't know...."
(Jusper)" Ok, so don't waste time come here!"
    They spend nice time playing together, until there came a time to go home. Balto and Jenna came for their pups.
(Jenna)" Ringo! Chino! Tina! Ginger! Boozer! Dory! Jusper! Come here! Time to go home!"
" Oh Nooooo..........................We don't wanna go home......." the puppies replied.
(Jenna)" I'm sorry, but you have to eat something and go to sleep....Now come on!"
 All of the puppies went inside, but....Where is Jusper?
(Balto)" And what about Jusper? Jusper!"
(Jusper)" Yes....I know....ehm...I'm coming...Papa, Momma look! I got a new friend!"
(Balto)" Oh how nice...Can we meet her or him?
(Jusper)" Yeah, sure! Her name is Susie. She lives near us."
(Jenna)" Hello Susie!"
(Balto)" Hello!"
(Susie)" Hello Jusper's parents!"
(Jenna)" Susie, where do you live. It's evening, your parents may be worry. You should go home now..."
(Susie)"Ehm...yeah but I'm very hungry, and I've told my momma that I will be longer...."
(Jenna)"Balto, may be could take her for a dinner and then take her home, she shouldn't go alone and if we miss the dinner the pups will cry whole night..."
(Balto)"Hmm...Ok, Susie! We will take you for a dinner and then we gonna go with you"
(Susie)"Ok"
They went to fet their dinner and then, as Jenna sugested, went with Susie to get her save to home.

"Momma....I, I, I'm home..."Susie said with a thin voice.
"Susie, baby, where have you been, I was so worried!" Anna said hardly hugging Susie.
"Mum, I'm so sorry, I didn't know that..."Susie tried to explaing while Steele came in and said:
"Susie!!!Susie!!!!!!!Where are you, you stupid dog?!"
"Steele, calm down...That's not her fault..." Anna tried to protect Susie.
"What?!?! That she didn't came on tiume is not her fault?!?!?!" Steele replied even more angry "Do you think I will allow my child to came so late?!?! Do you think she will avoid her sanction?!?!NEVER!!!Susie!!!COME HERE!!!"
"Yes daddy....." Susie said quietly.
"Give me the right reason of why you was so late!!" Steele barked at her.
"That wasn't my fault, I didn't know that it is late afternoon, and I was playing with my friend...then his parents took me to the dinner, because they wanted to go with me, and they didn't want me to go alone..."
"WHAT?!?!YOU ate a dinner with dogs what you even don't know?!?!?!?!Go to your bed I don't want to see you here until tomorrow!!!!!!"Steele barked at her with very big anger. Susie went to her bed crying. She hide her head in her blanket, so no one could see if she's in there. Anna was worried. She didn't want Steele to be so much angry on his daughter. She respects him and he even doesn't want to play with her.
"Steele, honey, calm down, you shouldn't bark at her like that, she's your daughter. Each time she sees you she want to hug you but you are too busy with Iron, she's jealous. She needs you Steele, you're her father"
"But I can't show her that I allow coming so late!And that's not true, I am playing with her sometimes, Iron  and Thunder needs me as well I can't play all the time with her!!" Steele replied.
"But SHE needs you as well! Don't you see that? Don't you see how much she wants some good words from you? Think about her, she's your daughter! Don't focus only on the boys, she's a part of you too" Anna said and then went to Susie.
"Susie...Susie...are you sleeping..?" Anna said with soft voice. Susie turned her head forward to see her mum, but she didn't came out of a blanket.
"I'm sorry momma, are you angry at me? I didn't want to make daddy angry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" Susie said crying.
"No honey, I'm not angry at you, come here....Daddy was shouting so much because he was so worried about you, he didn't know what is happening..." Anna tried to cheer Susie up.
"But he's angry at me and he doesn't like me now....." Susie cried.
"No Susie, daddy loves you very much, it is just because he was so worried..." Anna replied.
"Really...?" Susie

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April 30, 2007
Sweden Male
Ok.......... something is serius wrong. when i
trying to read this story all I get up is a LITTLE bit empty
pease of "paper" so I can't read the story

April 28, 2007
Usa Female
that was a good story

September 15, 2006
Usa Male
Great characters and a great story . Looking forward to
the next Beauty Jenna

September 16, 2006
Canada Female
SO GOOD GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

September 16, 2006
Usa Male
I've read all your fics and this one is great! the others
are too but I loved the pups speech! GREAT JOB!

September 16, 2006
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Good Story!!!

September 17, 2006
Yay! Very good so far! Can't wait to see how the two get
reunited!

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September 17, 2006
Very nice. I love the story. I also love the pic that goes
with it. It is sooooo good. I love it. I cant wait for the
next story. GOOD LUCK!!!

September 19, 2006
Female
Oh thank you very much! Kelev--> Yes, I thought so
I'm not so good at grammar but thank you for correction (my
language have to improve^^Not get even worse )Thank
you^^And I'm gonna write next story (I hope) soon^^

September 19, 2006
That is a good fic please hurry with it it is so good adn
the art of the characters is good as well!

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