LOVE'S CRIME IS IN THE MIDDLE OF A RE-EDIT!!!! THIS STORY WILL BE EDITED COMPLETLY WHEN THIS MESSAGE GOES AWAY.
Prologue:
January 22, 1929, One year after Balto 3: Wings of Change, The U.S Mail dog sled team is on the way back to Nome with a shipment of mail and a little supplies for a new building that is ready for a Police team that was sent out by the United States Vice President, Charles G. Dawes in Washington D.C after Nome's old Police team vanished during a blizzard one month ago. The sled team have returned to Nome, leaded by the hardest worker in the whole team, the son of the legendary hero, Kodi. After Kodi and his team are unhitched, they decide to go to the beach to celebrate the completion of the building. While there, they try to see if the Police team is coming today, but they expect it to come on a Police boat from Anchorage, Alaska.
Nome, Alaska
Chapter 1: The Newcomers
2: 46 PM
"Man, I can't wait until the snow melts, it's all downhill until were done for the year" said Kirby.
"Hold up Kirb, remember last year we had a really bad blizzard on our last day" said Ralph "That better not happen this year" said Dusty behind him "I hate blizzards" Kirby said
Kodi comes into the conversation "you and you’re complaining Kirby". Both Ralph and Dusty begin to laugh. Dusty then begins to change the subject "Have you guys heard there is a wolf clan in the 2 mile radius of Nome" she said and Ralph and Kirby began to talk about it, but Kodi had discovered the scent of burning gasoline, and then began to hear a strange but familiar sound.
"Hang on guys, you hear that" said Kodi with his ears up hearing some buzzing sound. "Hear what?" said Dusty "The Ocean?" said Kirby "No, either it's another bush plane..." Kodi knew this would upset his team, so said something that would make Dusty and Kirby, or at least Kirby laugh about. "Or it's Ralph again" Kodi said sarcastically said . Dusty and Kirby started to laugh, but Kirby was more like cracking up, he was on his back laughing so hard. "Nice w, one!!!" Kirby said in between his laughter.
"That was only once, I stole Simpson's beans that night" Ralph said embarrassed.
"I can hear it too" said Kirby as he finally stopped laughing, and got up "Me to, where is it though?" said Dusty "Found it" said Kirby depressingly looking across the water to the south-east.
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On the Old Trawler...
"Hey, Boris, what happened to Stella, you guys break up, I haven't seen her in a week" Balto said under his blanket noticing Boris come up on the ramp "huh, oh yeah, she's up north with her friends, she'll be back tonight or tomorrow." Boris said only hearing what happened to Stella.
Balto thought that was odd because Jenna is coming home tonight too from her trip she took with Rosie and her family to Fairbanks to visit relatives.
Balto then began to hear the same buzzing sound as Kodi did but more clear to him without the waves and three people talking at once. "Please don't be another plane" Balto thought to himself. "Boris you..." Balto said but Boris was gone. Balto got up and put his front paws on the rail of the boat and was looking around, then saw Kodi and his team down the beach looking around for it too "Well I'm not going crazy, they hear it too" he thought to himself. "Wait, what's that" he said to himself looking down the water to the south-east, he saw a floating black, bumpy line just above the horizon.
"If that's another bush plane looking to take their jobs again, I'm not helping them this time" he said to himself looking back to his son's team.
He looked back to the distant plane heading right for Nome getting bigger every second.
"I'm going to go get a better view" he said to himself then jumped off the boat and jogged to Kodi and his team.
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"Kodi, you sure it's a bush plane it looks bigger" said Ralph "I only see 2 wings not 4 like last year" said Dusty.
"Kodi" someone said behind the team "Dad!?" Kodi said surprised and he said "Dad, there's a plane..." "I know, I need to see it, I'm to go get a better view" Balto said not even stopping, he jogged right past the team and Kirby and Ralph followed. It was only Kodi and Dusty at that spot.
Dusty was very nervous about the plane, but she knew Kodi can find a way to cheer her up, he always does. She moved closer to Kodi and said to him "Kodi, what happens if that's another Bush Plane, I really don't want to race another plane" Kodi looked away from the ocean and to Dusty, he can see the fear in her eyes, he smiled at her and nudged her on the shoulder and said "Hey, don't worry, It's too big, I'm hoping it's a cargo plane carrying supplies for that new building back in town" "I'm hoping that too" said Dusty a little more relived.
"Guys, guys, I see more than one propeller, I don't think it's a Bush Plane" Ralph yelled running over with Balto and Kirby following "Ralph calm down what is it then" Dusty said "A Cargo Plane" Balto said "Yeah... what he said" Kirdy said behind Balto "Told ya" Kodi said to Dusty sarcastically. She then gave Kodi a playful evil eye and playful pushed him. "Your right for once" she joked.
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2 minutes later
The plane went too low as it approached the beach and was about 10 feet above ground. "Put you heads down!" Balto yelled as the plane flew at low altitude right over their heads. Balto took a good look under the wings. Both of them had a symbol that neither Balto nor any other dog in Nome had ever seen before. It was a circle and a star inside of it and in the middle of the star was smaller circle.
(I'm not good with descriptions; I found a picture on Wikipedia of the symbol Balto saw under the plane's wings)
The plane gained altitude and flew over the town. Balto and his son's team hoped it would just keep flying, it didn’t. The plan circled around and landed as close to the town as it can so it's able to take off again.
Everyone who didn’t see the plane before see it now. Every dog and human went to see the plane. Balto and Kodi's team cut through the large crowd of people and dogs up to the front. When Kodi got there he heard in the background Mel complaining about the plane. Kodi rolled his eyes and looked at the strange plane. This plane was 3X the size of the Bush Plane, in fact this lane was so big, it needed 3 propellers to make it fly. The plane said on the side of the hull "US Air Corps" and under that it said in small white printing "Washington DC". With the three propellers still turning, everyone stood a good distance away from it. The 5 dogs can heard people saying "What's the Military doing here" and "is Alaska now an official state of the US" and "I wonder if it's that’s the Police team we sent out for". Balto was confused of what they were talking about. Then in the Mayer of Nome budged through the crowd and up to the plane.
Then the two pilots of the plane stepped out of the cockpit in full military uniform and walked up to the Mayer and both saluted him and one said "Is this the town of Nome, Alaska" he said putting his hand down. The Mayer said "yes sir it is" "Good afternoon, I am Captain Kyle Patterson and this is my co-pilot Sergeant Luke Wales, we are here for a delivery for a Police team you sent out for from New York City, sir, here is the paperwork signed by Vice President Charles Dawes himself" said the captain. "Ah we've been expecting you, but your plane says Washington DC" said the Mayer "The planes from DC the team's from New York" replied the captain "I see". "Wow, this has Dawes's signature to, and... President Coolidge's!!! Wow, I need to hang this" the Mayer said read the signatures from both Vice President Charles Dawes and President Calvin Coolidge.
(Yes, both Dawes and Coolidge were in the White House at that time, they both left a little less than 2 months in the future)
"Anything else, or should I let them out?"."No, there now official citizens of Nome" said the Mayer. The captain gave a whistle and then yelled back to the plane "Let 'em out".
The humans in the crowd couldn't hear what the Mayer and the military captain were saying but the dogs were able to hear every word. Then the back door, under the tail wing slowly opened. Then two black cars with a red light on the top rolled off the plane. The cars said "Nome Police Department". Inside the car was tons of luggage and the drivers both were wearing Police caps and Police uniforms. Then the two engineers of the plane were carrying a large and long wooden sign also saying "Nome Police Department". The crowd split into two to let the cars and the engineers through. They stopped at the newly constructed building two houses away from the Post Office,
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I never got a chance to read it, that came out better than I
thought. I saw you write another version a month ago, you must have rewrote it. |