I liked this one, although you swear a bit too much than
what my comfort zone enjoys ().
Your story is
well-made, and it flows easily. But the descriptions lack.
What exactly does your doberman look like? What about Ian?
How does he look, other than wolfish? What about the humans?
What did they look like (more accurately), environments,
etc?

The lack of descriptions isn't too much of
a bother though. Although I would have liked to be able to
see the image you have in your head of each character.

Other than that, your story flows beautifully
well, and apart from a few grammatical and spelling errors,
it's awesome.

My rating: 8/10.

(Thank you for purchasing Wolflux's fiction critique
service =P)

wow, just wow. That was really well written, touched on a
lot of subjects that and the story was told so well.
Gripping read mate, can' wait for the next part