Confusion of Purpose

Confusion of Purpose

an Aleu poem (2-2-06)

 

by Juuchan17

 

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What am I?

A husky? A wolf?

So many unanswered queries,

not a single thought of my feelings.

 

Why didn't you tell me?

Afraid of my anger? My fury?

So overprotective of your own daughter,

unknown of the loneliness within.

 

Why don't you set me free?

Be wild! Be who you are!

So you're here with me,

still confused by spiritual visions.

 

Why can't you understand?

Stay here! This is mine!

So I have found my life's purpose,

this is not your place to be.

 

Have you accepted it yet?

Farewell! Goodbye!

So it's now my time to go home,

Let me go.



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December 18, 2011
Usa Male
I'll admit I prefer more structured poems. But as strictly free-form poetry goes, this is good.

Guest
Guest
December 01, 2011
wow! i like it! :P

redwolf03
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February 04, 2006
It was OK. I personally don't really like Aleu that much, mainly because of her defiance and low level of maturity at the beginning of B2, but this poem was OK.

Guest
Guest
January 07, 2007
I don't usually understand poetry, But This is nice




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