Confusion of Purpose

Author : Juuchan17

Date sent : February 03, 2006

Rating : G (Everyone)

Category : Other

Description : An Aleu poem. Mainly her thoughts of her father's overprotection. Short, sweet and simple. Rated G

Length : Very short -

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Confusion of Purpose
By Juuchan17

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December 18, 2011
Usa Male
I'll admit I prefer more structured poems. But as strictly free-form poetry goes, this is good.

Guest
Guest
December 01, 2011
wow! i like it! :P

redwolf03
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February 04, 2006
It was OK. I personally don't really like Aleu that much, mainly because of her defiance and low level of maturity at the beginning of B2, but this poem was OK.

Guest
Guest
January 07, 2007
I don't usually understand poetry, But This is nice




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