are like that,” said Aniu.
“Sora, Riku, Kairi, Donald, Goofy, stay still,” Balto said as he held his wolf blade in the air.
Magic started to swirl around them and when it was done, Sora and his friends did not look like humans anymore. Sora looked like a two year old brown wolf. Riku was a black and grey wolf. Kairi was a light tan wolf. And Donald and Goofy were grey wolves.
“What happened?” Kairi said.
“I turned you five into wolves to make it easier for us to get everyone out of that place.”
“What have you done tome!” shouted Donald.
“Take it easy Donald,” said Jenna. “ My husband knows what he is doing, right Balto?”
Balto just nodded his head.
When they reached the bottom of the hill they walked into town and saw a flurry of footprints and paw prints.
“Oh no,” Jenna said suddenly.
“What is it, Mom?” said Aleu.
Aleu saw the sad look on her mother’s face when she saw that she was holding a leather harness that had the name “Kodi” on it.
“Don’t worry Jenna, we’ll get your friends and family back safely,” said Riku.
Balto looked at the castle with his blade in his jaw.
“This is going to end here,” Balto said.
They all started to run toward the castle and to the upcoming battle.
Chapter 8: The Rescue.
Entrance to Hollow Bastion
As the three dogs and the five who were turned to wolves ran toward the castle, Donald tripped over his feet for the fifth time.
“I can’t take this no more!” shouted Donald.
“Take it easy Donald. It is not that hard,” said Aleu.
“Well, you walk on all fours. I only walk on two,” said Donald.
“Well, let’s get this over with,” said Sora.
Balto shot his howling blaster at the door and it flew open.
Meanwhile in the underground cell of the castle, Dusty was worried.
Kodi looked over at his mate and also started to worry. Kodi started to think about what happened just hours ago.
-Flashback-
“I wonder how long they will be gone?” said Saba.
“Don’t worry sis. Mom and Dad will be fine. Remember Sora and his friends are with them,” said Dingo.
“Well, let’s get some rest,” said Kodi.
The dogs that were asleep in the boiler room had a warm room.
Rosy was at home and she was worried about Balto and Jenna.
The General Store owner was closing the store for the night and when he turned, there was a wolf-like Heartless.
“Ah, Heartless!” shouted the owner.
When Kodi heard the scream, he woke the others up.
“Wake up! They’re back.”
When the dogs ran outside of the boiler room, they saw about one thousand Heartless.
But what Kodi saw behind the Heartless is what scared him: a giant one-eyed monster.
Standing next to him was a blue human with a flame for hair. It was Hades.
“Go get all the humans and their dogs from this town.”
“Okay.”
Everyone in the town was running, and the dogs were barking.
-End Flashback-
Kodi was now hoping his family would return soon.
But what he did not know is that they were already inside.
When they were inside, they were searching, and now that they were all wolves (with the exception of Jenna) they used their sense of smell tot locate them.
“They’re below us,” said Aleu.
“Stand back. Sora can you levitate me in the air?” said Balto.
“Sure,” said Sora.
Sora lifted Balto in the air and when Balto was high enough, he fired his holwing blaster at the floor, then had Sora lower him down.
When Balto was down, he saw the prison with the entire town,
“Dad!” said Kodi.
When Rosy heard Kodi bark, she saw why.
“Balto!”
Rosy was happy to see Balto and so was the rest of the town.
When Rosy was Captain Hook sneaking up on Balto, she yelled.
“Balto watch out!”
Balto turned just in time and had the wolf blade ready and stopped Hook’s own sword.
Everyone in the cell was shocked at what their hero was holding.
“Mangy mutt,” said Hook. “I’ll be back.”
After Hook left, everyone else was down in the lower area.
Balto walked up to the bar doors and slashed at them with his blade.
The town was happy, but at the same time shocked to see Balto holding a weapon.
“How did he get that?” said Rosy.
Balto forgot and changed Sora and the others back to normal.
“Sora, those wolves were you and your friends,” said Rosy.
“To answer your question, Rosy, Balto was destined to find this weapon and help us.”
What happened next was unexpected, Xemnas acquired the wolf blade and pierced Balto’s heart with it.
“Nooooo!” shouted Jenna.
“Now that the wolf blade master is gone, he won’t be giving me anymore problems,” said Xemnas.
Jenna laid her head on Balto’s lifeless body. She tried to use the magic healing ability that Aniu gave her, but it did not work.
The whole town noticed that Balto’s body was starting to vanish until it was gone.
Xemnas threw the wolf blade to the ground.
“I don’t need this anymore.”
All of the dogs started to growl at him for what he did, and then he vanished.
“I’ll get him for what he did to my husband,” said Jenna.
“Calm down. We can’t rush in,” said Riku.
“Let’s just get out of here,” said Kairi as tears flowed down her face.
After everyone left, a wolf-like Heartless appeared and followed them.
When everyone was outside, they realized how sad they felt that Balto was gone.
When Rosy turned she saw the Heartless.
“Stay back!”
What surprised her was that it listened to her. Then she saw all kinds of Heartless appearing in the town.
Jenna then thought Could this Heartless be Balto? Then she sensed it was him.
“Now it’s my turn to protect you,” said Jenna as she embraced him in a canine hug.
Then a bright light appeared and Jenna was once again hugging her mate.
Sora walked up to Balto and held out the wolf blade.
“I think this is yours.”
Balto walked up to Sora after he let go of his embrace with Jenna.
When Balto saw all of the Heartless that were appearing in the town, he knew what to do.
“Everyone cover your ears!” shouted Sora.
Balto used his “howling wail” on the Heartless, defeating every single one of them.
“Sora, what is going on?” asked Rosy.
Before Sora could answer the ground started to shake and, at the entrance to the town appeared two big doors with a wolf’s face.
Chapter 9: The Battle Within
Nome, Alaska
At the entrance of the town was the doorway to Kingdom Wolves.
“This is it,” said Sora.
“Is this what that bad man is looking for?” said Rosy.
“Yes.”
Balto walked up to Sora and used his head to say, “Come over here.”
“Yeah.”
“My mother told me it was my destiny to protect this doorway from the forces of darkness.”
“So, you are the chosen one to protect Kingdom Wolves.”
“I guess so, I wonder what my wife is going to say.”
The two just started to laugh but then they stopped when a dark aura started to appear around the whole town.
“What’s going on?” said Rosy.
“I don’t know, dear,” said her mother.
Sora and the group looked around the whole area.
“This can’t be good,” said Balto.
Xemnas then appeared with the cyclops monster and what was left of his followers.
“Keyblade master, wolf blade master. This is where it ends,” said Xemnas.
“Xemnas, I stopped you twice. What makes you think you will succeed?”
Before anyone knew it, the town of Nome was enveloped in a dome of dark energy.
“Why are you doing this?” said Rosy.
“Why am I doing this? Power. Absolute power is what I desire,” said Xemnas.
“Sora and his friends will stop you.”
“They can try, but this time they will fail,” Xemnas said as he fired a blast of dark magic at Rosy.
“Rosy!” screamed her parents.
Before the blast hit her, she was knocked down by Jenna.
“Rosy’s parents ran up to her and petted Jenna’s head.
Jenna just looked at Xemnas and growled at him.
“What are you going to do to me, mutt?”
Jenna looked at her owners.
“How dare you attack her.”
Rosy and her family just looked at Jenna.
“Mom, did Jenna just talk?” said Rosy.
Jenna just jumped at Xemnas and bit his arm.
“Stupid mutt!” Xemnas shouted as he hit Jenna with his dark energy sword.
Balto, Aleu, Kodi, Saba and Dingo ran up to her.
“Mom, are you alright?” said Aleu.
“Yeah, Aleu. I’m fine,” Jenna said as Balto walked up to her with his blade in his mouth. He held it over her and held her just to be safe.
Balto looked at Xemnas and his followers with anger burning in his eyes.
“How dare you attack my mate!”
Balto shot his howling blaster at full power toward the giant, destroying him.
Xemnas was now angry.
“Leave.”
“What do you mean, leave,” said Captain Hook.
“I said GO!” shouted Xemnas.
The rest of his followers obeyed and left.
Sora ran up to Balto.
The whole town was gathered behind Balto and Sora.
“I will still open Kingdom Wolves. All I have to do is sacrifice the sacred wolf.”
“Well, you won’t find the sacred wolf,” said Sora.
“I don’t need to look,” he said as he looked at Balto.
-Flashback-
Xemnas was now getting impatient because he could not find out how to open Kingdom Wolves.
Xemnas walked over to Maleficent.
“Ask your mirror how to open the door way.
She walked over to a wall with a big round mirror.
“Mirror, Mirror on the wall. Tell us how to open Kingdom Wolves.”
The mirror replied, “”To open Kingdom Wolves you must sacrifice the sacred wolf.”
“And who is the sacred wolf?”
“The sacred wolf is the hero of the town of Nome,” said the mirror as it showed Balto.
“So, the wolf blade
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Not bad! Although it seemed a little rushed. In the sequel, try to put more discription into it. Despite that, nice job! I LOVE Kingdom Hearts and Balto! |
This is a very well-written story, although the spelling and
punctuation need an adjustment (you frequently spelled
"lose" with two "o's"). I'm looking forward to the sequel!