Chapter 1: A New Adventure
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"Sora! Riku!" Kairi shouted.
The two friends turned around to see Kairi running to them, holding a bottle. She was breathing hard when she got to them.
"What's up?" Sora asked.
"Look," Kairi said.
Kairi showed Sora and Riku the bottle with a letter inside. On the piece of rolled up parchment was the king's symbol.
"From the king?" Sora said, grabbing the bottle.
He opened the bottle and read the letter:
Dear Sora, Kairi and Riku.
I'm afraid I have some bad news. Xemnas has returned and is more powerful then ever before.
Kairi gasped when she finished reading that part.
"Oh no!" Sora shouted.
"How can this be. I thought we defeated him?" Riku said.
"Wait, there's still more."
...Xemnas is trying to steal a Time Transporter from Merlin and he has made a new Organization XIII. His lackies are still the Heartless and some other villains you have faced before, Sora, But there are some you have never seen and have great power.
"What!" Sora shouted.
The letter went on:
...So, I sent Donald and Goofy to retrieve you, Kairi and Riku to come to DisneyCastle so I can fully explain everything.
King Mickey.
Sora just stared at the letter. His mouth was wide-open. He couldn't believe it. Xemnas was back and he made another Organization. Riku put his hand on Sora's shoulder.
Sora looked at him and Kairi.
"Come on," Sora said. "We've got to wait for Goofy and Donald to arrive."
An hour later after they got ready, Donald and Goofy lannded the Gummi ship on the beach. Sora, Kairi and Riku made their way to the Gummi ship, with one click of a button, they were on their way to DisneyCastle. They landed in the Gummi Garage to see Chip and Dale running towards them.
"Welcome back!" Chip said.
"Hurry! King Mickey and Queen Minnie are waiting in the Throne Room!" Dale said.
"Thanks guys," Sora said as he and the others ran to the Throne Room.
When they got there, they saw King Mickey and Queen Minnie, along with Merlin.
"You made it," King Mickey said. "I am glad you recieved my message."
"Now tell us. How did Xemnas survive? And what exactly is the new Organization XIII?" Sora said.
"Calm down, Sora," King Mickey said. "I'll explain everything. But first, you need to calm down."
"He's right, Sora," Kairi said.
Sora looked at her and took a deep breath.
"Okay, I'm calm," Sora said. "Now tell me what happened."
"Well," King Mickey explained. "When you and Riku thought Xemnas was destroyed once and for all, Xemnas managed to absorb both light and dark to keep him from truly vanishing. The light and darkness gave him a new body, along with new powers and abilities you can't even imagine."
"But why does he want the Time Transporter?" Sora asked.
"To be honest, I have no idea why he wants my Time Transporter," said Merlin. "I don't even think it works."
"But if it doesn't work, then what use does Xemnas have for it?" said Donald.
Suddenly, hundreds of Heartless appeared in the Throne Room. The King and Queen were surprised. Sora, Kairi and Riku had their Keyblades ready, while Donald had his magic staff out and Goofy had his shield out for battle.
"Thunder!" Sora shouted.
Sora held his Keyblade high in the air and small sparks formed at the end, but above five Heartless were struck by bolts of thunder.
"Take that," Sora said.
Goofy was ramming the Heartless with his shield and some couldn't take the impact.
"Not bad, huh," Goofy said.
Riku was defeating the Heartless thanks to the power of darkness he acquired while he was in the realm of darkness. Riku's Keyblade had a dark aura that destroyed the Heartless very fast.
Kairi was wielding her Keyblade at the Heartless and struck five of them and they dissappeared in a mist.
The King noticed that they needed help so his Keyblade appeared and the King jumped over the Heartless and right next to Donald.
"About time you help out, your Majesty!" Donald shouted.
With all six using combined magic, they were able to destroy every Heartless in the room.
"Thank goodness you were able to defeat them all," Queen Minnie said.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, Xemnas swiped the Time Transporter right out of Merlin's hands.
"Thank you very much, old wizard."
Sora and the gang were ready to fight their arch enemy again, and this time Sora was going to make sure Xemnas stayed down permanently.
"Keyblade master, the last two times we encountered each other, you foiled my plans to take control of Kingdom Hearts but this time you won't be able to stop me since I have this," Xemnas said while holding up the Time Transporter.
"We were able to stop you before, so the Time Transporter won't make any difference," Sora said.
Xemnas turned the dials on the device and a doorway opened.
"This time, Keyblade master, you will not stop me," Xemnas laughed as he jumped through the doorway.
Sora was about to jump through when someone grabbed his arm. He turned around and saw that it was Kairi who was holding him.
"Kairi, please let go. I have to stop him," Sora pleaded.
"But Sora, you don't know where this doorway leads," Kairi said.
"Kairi is right, Sora," said King Mickey. "You do not know where this door will lead you."
"That's a chance I have to take," Sora said.
"Very well! Donald, Goofy, you go with Sora and help him out," said the King.
"I'll go too and assist them," said Riku.
"Kairi are you going to go and help them?" asked Queen Minnie.
"Yeah! I'll go. Sora and Riku are helpless without me," Kairi said with a smirk.
"Hey!" Sora and Riku said in unison.
With that said, the group of five were ready to start their quest.
"Whatevere you encounter, always remember that the Keyblades will guide you, and good luck," said the King.
After the king said his words of advice, the five jumped through the doorway before it shut.
"I hope they make it back," said Chip.
"They will. Remember, Sora is the master of the Keyblade," said Queen Minnie.
With Sora and the gang drifting through the portal, they reached a bright light and fell to the ground. When they hit the ground, they landed on a thick blanket of cold, white, fluffy material.
"We landed in snow!" Sora said.
"We be-better find a place to stay warm," said Kairi.
"Hey, look over there," Goofy said.
Goofy was pointing to an old fishing trawler.
"Perfect! We could stay in there to keep warm," Sora said.
Sora and friends made their way to the trawler. They walked up the wooden plank and they all stayed in the captain's cabin for the remainder of the night.
Chapter 2: Welcome to Nome
Rosy's House
Balto decided to stay the night at Rosy's to spend some time with his mate Jenna. When Balto woke up the following morning, he gently nudged Jenna with his paw.
"Balto, it's still to early to be waking up," Jenna said in a groggy voice.
"I know it's early, but I want to get an early start on our morning out."
"But what if Kodi or somebody comes by?" Jenna asked.
Balto replied, "If Kodi comes by, he knows to either wait here or meet us at my boat."
"Alright then let's go," Jenna said.
Balto and Jenna crept slowly out of the house so they would not be heard and headed out.
Meanwhile back at Balto's boat, Sora and the gang were just waking up. Sora was starting to think that this boat might be someone's home. Then, when he looked next to the wall where Kairi was sleeping, he saw an old wool blanket. When Sora walked out of the captain's cabin he looked down and saw a bowl of water.
"Guys wake up!" Sora shouted.
The others quickly shot up when they heard Sora shouting.
"What was that for!" Donald shouted due to his temper.
"Sorry, but I think we are in someone's home."
"Why do you say that?" said Goofy.
Sora pointed to the blanket and to the bowl of water.
"Well, if anyone does live here, we just have to wait and see who it is," Riku said.
"Look guys, there's a town," Kairi said.
After they discovered a town was near, Sora, Kairi and Riku decided to head there to buy some supplies. Some dogs by an old abandened building on the outskirts of town, started barking at the trio. They also noticed that while they were walking down the street, people were also staring at them. They looked around for a supply shop and the found the General Store. When they walked in, the bell rang to let the owner know he had customers. The owner was surprised at the way they were dressed.
"I think you kids could use some better clothes than what you are wearing now."
The owner brought them some clothing that would fit them. They took the clothes and they individually went into the back room to change into the new clothes. When Sora came out, he went to a shelf to get some food.
"How much do we owe you?" Sora asked.
"You owe me a total of twenty dollars," replied the sore owner.
"Is this enough?" Sora asked while setting down the munny on the counter.
The man was surprised at how much he was staring at on the counter. "That's more than enough," he replied.
As they walked outside, they saw a
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Not bad! Although it seemed a little rushed. In the sequel, try to put more discription into it. Despite that, nice job! I LOVE Kingdom Hearts and Balto! |
This is a very well-written story, although the spelling and
punctuation need an adjustment (you frequently spelled
"lose" with two "o's"). I'm looking forward to the sequel!