Loni awoke with a start. What was that dream about? All she had seen was black,but she could still hear voices. Did it mean anything? Her father lay next to her sleeping. Their box had a hole in it again,and water from the rain pounded on her head. Why was she woke up? She woke her father,pushing on his brown dirty coat,"Papa? Wheres Mama? Why is there a hole in the box again?"

That was all she could say,but there were more questions,had mama run from the rain? Did the hole come from mama's claws? Papa moved around the box floor and finally woke up. "Don't worry Loni,the box will be fixed. But your mother died yesterday  while you were out looking for a new master that wouldn't abanden you."

That morning Loni did not go out to find a master.. But there were two reasons for that. Her head was throbbing and she wanted mama. This time papa went out for Loni,and when he returned he jumped for joy. "Loni! We can leave this box! A new master felt pity for me and has taken both of us in!" But Loni didn't jump with her father. She just followed him to the apartment where they would soon be
living.

The minute they both walked into the apartment,the new master greeted them and immediately took them to the vet for checkups. When her father walked out of the examinataon room,Loni did not run to him asking questions,she just slowly walked into the room where she was wanted.The vet examined her whole body except her eyes. "Shes fine Thomas,just bring him in so we can check his...tumour."

A tumour?" Loni walked up to her father slowly. "Whats that Papa?" "It is...well what your mother had,its Cancer." Loni heard alot about this. She knew what happened when it wasn't taken care of right away. You die.

Four months later,Loni's vision became horrible,she could still see,but  everything was blobby. Her father also became worse. The master was now married,and Loni could hear him say to his wife in the kitchen,"I am taking

Saber to the vet,so keep an eye on Minnie. If Loni could talk,she would tell him off. She hated the name Minnie. Just as Thomas and Saber mad it to the docter,Loni's vision slowly started to get worse. She had not yet heard ,the door,so her father was laying asleep on his pillow. She also didn't know how to spell,and always forgot what they had named her father.

"Thomas,we treated him too late. Saber has died." Back at home Loni had lost all vision. "Papa? Why can't I see you?" she asked quietly. When no one answered she thought Cancer had taken her father's voice.

"Papa,has....it....taken your voice?" she asked trembling.. No one answered again,so she said,"It has. I have also lost something. I can't see it. What was it called..lindless? No blindness!" When she turned fifteen years in human years she was forced to move out of the apartment due to Thomas commiting murder. It being the winter season she was forced to live in the cold wheather. She moved into an alley way and never left. As it snowed more and more she envisioned the fireplace,pillows,feats, and her father.

"Papa! Papa! Where are you?!" As he walked off into the heavens,she knew what had happened. Her father had died. "Papa! Take me with you!" As he walked off back,she followed...they both walked off in the heavens. The next morning ,Loni lie in the alley way...covered in snow,dead. But when you look into the stars at night,you can see her,running with her father,young,sight,and all.



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Guest
Guest
January 27, 2007
great fanfic*favs* good job, just sad 10/10

January 26, 2007
Australia Female
Nice work but very sad

January 25, 2007
Usa Male
Great work! It's very sad, but that's how I like a lot of
stories. Keep writing!

January 24, 2007
Female
How sad. :cry: anyway, 10/10

Guest
Guest
January 23, 2007
That was really wierd. I mean, she hasn't died yet and can
SEE her father going to heaven and still she gets taken
away.

January 23, 2007
Usa Male
Sad indeed.

January 22, 2007
Usa Female
It was good!
You might wanna introduce the character
a little more to make it sadder but you did a nice job

January 22, 2007
Usa Female
not bad but it wasnt too sad at all. She was also of elder
age at the end of the story. 15 in human years? Wow thats
really old for a dog. Anyway its your story. pretty good.




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