great fanfic*favs* good job, just sad 10/10

Nice work but very sad

Great work! It's very sad, but that's how I like a lot of
stories. Keep writing!

How sad. anyway, 10/10

That was really wierd. I mean, she hasn't died yet and can
SEE her father going to heaven and still she gets taken
away.

Sad indeed.

It was good!
You might wanna introduce the character
a little more to make it sadder but you did a nice job

not bad but it wasnt too sad at all. She was also of elder
age at the end of the story. 15 in human years? Wow thats
really old for a dog. Anyway its your story. pretty good.