Really cool can't wait for the second one!

That.Was.Awesome!!!

i love all your storys if i was a wolf i would for it wait to go!

Sorry Jen_Husky

oops WOLF dog ::

I am a fan of your art and of Catwhohas14tail's... is the wold dog named Kiona by chance??

I can't say, you'll just have to keep reading > Thanks for the comments tho

Wonderful work, Draco! Keep writing, your and CatWho... characters are very interesting, I hope you continue! You really should draw some art for this story... you are a really good writer, I can't wait for the next one... and I do hope that Nayashi (Is that right?) and Achak do not meet in such a way again. And I meant to say... I have an old wolf character named Archaic, and I'll be mentioning him in some of my stories and art... I just want you to know that even though his name sounds similar to Achak's, it is actually a word... just look it up in Webster's Dictionary!! Anyway, keep writing, I can't wait for the next one!

*glomp* I can't wait till you add more!!

-Through the end one. Amazingly written! Ths story is sad, and
beautiful. I love how the final one is a telling Achack's side of the
story of how him and Kiona first met. Now I've read Kiona's part and
Achack's. Again, Amazing, with a capital A!