staggered, “Vait where are you going? To town?”

 

Balto looked at him “coldly why would I go there? I’m for the forest right now, is that a problem thought so.” He started running off, with out waiting for his replay. 

 

 

Cronos.

 

Cronos sighed he didn’t sleep at all last night, he found a town and all around looking for anyone who would recognize him. He didn’t find any as he looked he was lost.

 

He sighed again, he didn’t know what to do, “how I’m I going to get home?” he stared at the white sky, he watched the clouds move, he still didn’t really fully understand snow.

 

He was hungry, very hungry, he didn’t eat, since he was taken, or drank anything. Cronos wondered of how he would get home.

 

“Well I think I know,” a voice said to Cronos. He felt a Shriver go down his spine. He forced himself to turn to who claimed knew the way back. “Well hi.” It was Pete.

 

“How’d you get here? Why are you here?” Cronos asked confused about how Pete was there? He was confused.

 

Pete laughed, “HA! You don’t pay much attention I was on that sled team he borrowed my team.” Pete smiled with his teeth, which were perfect, Cronos swore in the day light would see that little light star thingy. “Now how to get home…”

 

“Don’t you have a team to worry about?” Cronos said he dreaded the thought of having HIM, on the way home.

 

Pete smirked, “Nah I was lying anyway.” Pete shrugged.

 

“WHAT?!” He shouted, “Then how’d you get here then!”

 

“It’s where I live or lived rather…I lived in many places I got a photo memory, you know. This is near Salmon Lake.”

 

“Uh…I remember…” Cronos said dreadfully. He did not like him at all, he wished anyone but him would help him.

 

“You a turned on guy, even when you where small very small you knew.” Pete smiled like it was something to be proud of.

 

“What are talking about I only know because my paw was stuck and you told me!” Cronos shout back.

 

“Well everyone else at older then you at the time had no idea what I was talking about you knew so.” Cronos cut off Pete.

 

“SHUT UP! Shut up! I don’t know why I knew what you were talking about I just knew! Ok?! I don’t see life that way! I just want to go home!!” He shouted out.

 

Pete paused, “Ok you don’t need to yell about it though, it’s all in a day work.” He started to walk away. He didn’t follow, Pete turned to him with his head, “Come on you idiot.” Pete said coldly.

 

“Fine…” Cronos said softly he didn’t want to go to him but he had no choice, but to trust him, it could lead him home.

 

Pete led him out of town though it took a long time, he seemed cold, Pete turned coldly, he smiled, “You don’t talk!” He turned to him, “I don’t like quiet, fine I’ll talk.”

 

Cronos shook his head, “Now where is MY home.” He said just wanting not to be around Pete.

 

“Rude, well just follow me, I know the way home.” he said, Pete started to walk Cronos followed; they didn’t make eye contact or anything of the sort. Cronos just looked forward.

 

It had been an hour before Pete finely broke the long quiet, “Well…I’ll tell you a story.” He said with a smirk, “If you run you will be lost and you can be lost for a long time too.”

 

“Fine I’ll listen, gosh.” Cronos said annoyed, “Can we run?”

 

“We will now…” Pete paused trying to get memory going, “Ah yes this one works, well I was hanging out in my place when a pretty dog came by, she was my breed not so pure but fairly pure from what I could see.” Cronos rolled his eyes, with his skills with females he will get beat up. Pete continued, “She was kind of little nervous to be around me and all, but she came up anyway though, that counts when a girl comes up to talk to you show more respect, to the, the story.” Cronos shook his head, He told me that because he didn’t and failed ha, ha! “Well he got talking about our lives, I asked her for hers first, and then she asked about mine, I didn’t talk that much, we both got bored and didn’t really know what to do.” Cronos’s eyes widened as he went on. “An then we well let tell you how it was like, she had fine legs by the way.” Cronos slightly whimpered at it.

 

Wilderness

 

A white paw slammed on the head on wolf, “Let that be lesson.” The wolf under the white wolf was dead, bitten at the throat, four wolves were around the dead wolf, they where also dead. The white wolf was slightly bloody, but he knew how to fight with not getting much blood on himself and the snow took most of it. “I can’t believe they called this a betas and an alpha. “It’s pitiful.” The white wolf said aloud. 

 

The white wolf step way from the dead wolves bodies and wondered on, his eyes caught a black wolf with red eyes following him with some others with him. The white wolf stopped, “You want something with me?”

 

The black wolf came into view, “I’m just a passing by, my name is Blood Wraith, and I have a favor to ask of you.” The white wolf didn’t do anything. Blood Shadow went on, “It’s about something I need taken care of Balto is some what in it.” The white wolf looked at him as somewhat shock, “Balto?” the white wolf said, Blood Shadow smiled.

 

Two days passed, Cronos act 3.

 

“How many dirty stories do you have!!” Cronos demanded to know, “Or you make them up?”

 

Pete “No I don’t make them up no.” Pete said proudly, “I’m just good with females.” Pete smiled. Cronos hit him in the head.

 

“I don’t like you.” He said firmly, “I don’t think you show proper respect to females. How many females you have done with…you didn’t stay just had your way! And left and in your stories how you want to be a consular, to help relationships out when you never had one! So how can you be one!? And were lost!”

 

Pete paused for a long time, “Just drop it then…I was one before so you know, I fixed a lot of things with mates having trouble from cheating, to attacking each other to many things…I’m not just that pervert I hope you see that one day.”

 

That caught him off guard. Pete started walking in a way, not talking at all, he felt terrible, for what he said, “Pete I’m sorry.”

 

Pete turned to him, “Well about me that’s not my real name.” Pete weakly smiled, “My name doesn’t matter, now lets go home.” He turned and bumped into a wolf, Pete responded to the wolf “Hello.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Commentary! YAY! Or you can just leave now this is my comments about this work woot!

 

Well to make it clear please reader don’t give that glare tis scary! I know your wondering what’s wrong with me… well just weird what. No! Stop it reader! No! Daddy didn’t love me! Sorry that’s not really true just wanted to say that yeah.

Well on to my thoughts as I wrote this one, ooh dear. Well the start, Balto and gang etc. now return from the previous one Balto’s war. So intros worries and sleepy. And among other things going on. I know I didn’t do that well this all pas time no biggy things! Not very big. Well to rap the summary up, ove this all sorry, its they go home we ha! Story goes on Cronos taken away, Cronos gets out meets Pete

Balto mad. Run into wolf. Yeah that’s fairly it. Did I misss something ahh I ashamed! Reader knows my story better then me! Ahh! Sometimes I can’t even remember the names to my story! *Crying* (reader going away)

 

I’m better now ah ha! So I hope my out let of this I know I’m making mine shorter now into parts cause someone said this to me, ‘lol why would anyone read that long of a story.’  Then I looked at mine…I saw, so read mine, ahhh! The mistakes!! IIEEEAAAA! I’m so, so, so, sorry my readers!! Can you ever forgive me? (reader: No mahah!) *cries* ahh!

 

So to my reader how did I do? Hmm? Terrible, bad, cool, ok, average Joe? 1/10 5/10 7/10? Hopely 7/10 so I get C grade. By my sight, well my Arch, oblivion, seems to be my greatest work, by stat it was number 8 in the most pop for a bit. So YAY!!^^ , also I put conetions such as Aladdin, he he you could see in this one. 

 

 

Well on the thankies! For the peeps! Comments peeps! Give a big thanks and get I give credit to the following peeps which I wouldn’t have gone so far with out!  Mystery Aleu R2-D2 Fan!, Raven-THP, Wolf_Fang30, Huyana, Padfoot, Navawolf, Elvish wolf, Redfoxwolf, KellyClarksonGirl, Tibb_wolf, Black Shimmer, Kira-wolf, lets not forget Snowpaw, sorry I’m going to put a little praise in the next one with ‘aleu’ this user said it took 3 days to read Balto’s War. Lets give a hand for alue taking the time for that, I now it was long just little lol. But lets give alue hand. *claps for alue*

Now give em all a hand!

Yes these are the peeps that commented, So now give em all a big hand they deserve big credit not single comment goes un noticed, each one helps! Unless you dis my the persons work, you don’t like this, then just flat out tell me like Kuni02 said they are too long. Thanks for that. In a way that did help me. So I’m doing this now part 1 of the fic so peeps can read ‘em easier because I’m all out going reader. I read the long and the short, Rotrmal is a writer long story I will spend a day reading all his fics I know long…but for me it’s fun and I enjoy it, that is what I’m trying to do make it fun to read.

 

All right reader, I’m very interested about your thoughts on this, I’m trying to make it a fun read to go about as you go though. If I’m doing something wrong just go flat up and say it You’re doing it wrong, that helps me out, it would be a bigger help if you put what you want me to change in the story.

 

Such as how’d the new character turn out the ‘pervert Pete’ did this character add to the story to any way? You going to see more of him, so tell me about him what did you think?

 

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April 22, 2007
Usa Male
Nice story. Pete almost strikes me as a personification of
the dark side of the internet. Or modern "education," for
that matter.

January 26, 2007
Usa Male
Thank RedRoxwolf!^^ *glomp!*

January 15, 2007
Usa Male
Great fic Arc!




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