Collie" Jusper said to one of Border Collie girl who was also a winner.
"Oh yes you are, a handsome Border Collie" she said.
That can't be the truth! I am NOT a Border Collie! I am NOT a Border Collie!!!Jusper thought.
"What's your name, handsome? I'm Masie" said the Border Collie girl.
"Please, leave me alone, I have some problems now" nervous Jusper replied.
"Ok, ok, I just want to know your name, I like you" Masie said.
"Jusper" Jusper answered.
" Jusper, that's a lovely name" Masie responded.
"Excuse me" Jusper said and went to his parents.
"Border Collie, huh?" Jusper said angry and went away.
"Jusper!" Susie called out behind him.
Balto and Jenna recognized that he just discovered the truth. They followed him. Susie wanted as well but Balto to her not to. Jusper was very angry. Steele was near to go to Susie while he saw what is going on with Jusper and his foster parents. An idea came to his mind. He wanted to separate Jusper from his family by turning him into his side so he can be with Susie, but Balto and Jenna will not have him as a son anymore.
"Why did you lie to me?! How could you do that to me?!" Jusper shouted.
"Jusper" Balto tried to speak.
"All that time I was living with some strangers!! All that time I was growing up in lies!!!" angry Jusper continued " I have one question: When did you plan to tell me?!"
" Jusper, now you'll listen to us." Balto tried to speak again.
"I just want to know how long did you want to lie to me!" Jusper called out.
" Jusper! Now I'm talking! I am still your father!" Balto said.
"No, You're NOT!" Jusper shouted.
"Whatever you say, listen!" Balto called out. Jusper quietly looked at him surprised.
" Shortly after your siblings were born, I went for a walk. I found you in a pile of snow. You were similar age what our pups, a newborn pup. I took you to my boat, warmed you up, gave you some water, and took to Jenna. We adopted you, Jenna gave you something to eat. We took care of you as of the rest of the pups. We grew you up, we brought you up, and you are saying that we are not your parents? That's true that Jenna didn't gave birth to you, but is this important to you? Is it really important?" Balto explained.
Jusper didn't say a word, he just run away. Susie saw it and wanted to run behind him. But on her way  Steele stood up. She was scared. She was scared that he's going to take her away from Jusper.
"Susie, why are you looking at me like I'm your enemy?" Steele asked her.
"I, I, I" she was trying to say something.
"Come on, we're going home" Steele said.
"NO!!" Susie screamed.
"What did you say? Don't worry I will bring Jusper home" Steele explained.
What? Susie thought No he will not, he's just lying to take me home!
"No, you will not! You are just lying to make me go with you! I'm not going!!" Susie answered.
" No, I'm not lying, I will, I promise!" Steele said.
Susie didn't know what to do. She was afraid of that he's gonna beat her up. She agreed.
After Steele brought Anna and Susie home, he went to look for Jusper. He found him on the beach. He was crying. He loved his parents so much and suddenly they disappeared. He discovered he has no relation to them and that he has no family. He had only Susie. Steele came to him. He really wanted Jusper to turn away from Balto and Jenna. He sat next to Jusper and said:
"Hi, my daughter misses you"
"Hey, you suppose to take her away from me" Jusper replied.
"Who told you that? I like you and I want you to be a part of my family" Steele resopned.
"Oh, at least you want, I don't have a family now" Jusper replied.
"So come one, you'll like it" Steele invited him.
"Do you really want it? you didn't like my father..oh I forgot, he's not my father anymore" Jusper replied.
"You see now why I hate him? As he took your happines and family, he took also my love. These wolves are always like that, you can't trust them" Steele lied.
"Really.." Jusper replied showing he's not interested in what Steele's twaddles.
"Come on, Susie's waiting" Steele said and got up.
 Jusper was still sitting.
"Come on, she's waiting!" Steele repeated.
Jusper got up and went with Steele.

***

Some days later Susie saw that Jusper and her dad get on so well. She always wanted her dad to pay more attention to her and now her and her dad communicated better as well. On the other side, Balto and Jenna were missing Jusper and were very worried about him. From the day Jusper ran away from them, he'd never been to visit them.
One day Balto and Kodi's team went for longer trip for the post to White Mountain. When they arrived, Kodi had some troubles with his left front leg. He had a wound there which was making him feel dizzy. Jusper, Susie and Steele were just coming back from running. Jusper saw Kodi, his older brother and Balto having some problems. Balto saw Jusper and called him. Jusper didn't move. Susie said:
" Jusper, your dad is calling you"
"Don't move, don't react on what he's saying, remember what I've told you?" Steele whispered to Jusper.
"Jusper, what are you waiting for?" Susie asked.
Jusper moved in his dad's direction. Steele was angry at him for that.
"Jusper, how good to see you, please, help us, look what happen to Kodi, he can't run with this wound" Balto begged.
Jusper didn't say anything. Steele was reminding him quietly what he learned him. On the other hand, Susie was encouraging him to help his father. Jusper was confused. He was still angry at his father, and he saw that Susie's father isn't that bad. He remind himself all these days when he was little, and he couldn't run properly, Balto learned him, cheered him up every time he needed the comfortability. Balto was always near him. I took you to my boat, warmed you up, gave you some water, and took to Jenna. We adopted you, Jenna gave you something to eat. I took you to my boat, warmed you up, gave you some water, and took to Jenna. We adopted you, Jenna gave you something to eat. Jusper couldn't stop thinking about what his father told him.
"Come on, we need to give my brother something, otherwise he can die" Jusper finally said.
"What?!?!?!" Steele asked surprised.
" I can't let my brother to die, and my dad asked me to help him, I can't leave them" Jusper answered.
"Jusper! How good to see you again son!!" Balto said happily.
"Dad" Jusper said and hugged his dearest daddy.
"If so, go away from my daughter!! Leave her alone!!" Steele shouted.
"Dad!" Susie called out.
"Susie! Go home, I will not allow him to be in my family!!" Steele shouted.
"Jusper!!Nooo" Susie screamed.
Jusper realized Steele's action. He saw that he doesn't care about his daughter, he just wants to destroy Balto and his family's happiness.
"Steele, leave Susie alone!She's with me now!" Jusper commanded.
"You will never see her again Jusper, she's not gonna be with you anymore, I will not allow it to happen!!!" Steele shouted.
Jusper attacked Steele and they started to fight. Susie ran to Balto's side and was protected by the rest of dogs from the team. Balto joined the fight and then Jusper and Balto were standing on top of Steele, Jusper was holding his paw on Steele's throat, so he couldn't move.
"Now, I'm taking Susie with me and I don't want to see you anywhere near us, understand?" Jusper  said.
"Li...sten..you...kid...I will n....not....lis..t..ten...to...ki..kid...s..." Steele hardly said.
"Oh, yes, you will! Guess who just won! Dad, can we go home?" Jusper replied.
"Yes, we can and as for Steele, Steele, we're not the same and we will not act even similar to you, so we let you go" Balto responded.
Jusper took his paw off Steele but he crumbled him enough so Steele could attack them again. Jusper, Balto and Susie turned away and left carrying Kodi with the team Steele's side full of anger, viciousness and rivalry, to live very different kind of life full of love, happiness and faithfulness


THE END.


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September 06, 2008
Usa Female
it was a good story but the ending was a little hard to follow and
what happened to tina?

August 31, 2008
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
read them both and thought they were absoultly excellent please write
more

Guest
Guest
May 13, 2007
Oh man!!!I wish you can write more of those stories,you
know,like a series of them!!!*Faves*

May 12, 2007
Sweden Male
Finally have I read both part 1 and 2 so I can't wait to
read the continue wich is The Truth That Tumbles The Trouble
if I understand it right

December 06, 2006
Aww! XD That was nice. I liked how you made Steele
manipulate Jusper. That was interesting. I hope you write
more of Jusper and Susie!

December 06, 2006
Female
Oh yes, I found out that yesterday that I'm gonna write abut
them more^^I'm glad you like it

December 07, 2006
Usa Male
Great job, finally I've been waiting for this one thankies!

December 07, 2006
Interetsting that Steele wouldn't even pay much attention to
Susie, and then he would go looking for her later on. Nice
fic, but you might want to work on paragraph placement too.

December 11, 2006
Canada Female
wow nice one buddy!




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